Lessons Learned and Spiritual
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Takes a Special Mother to be Mom"Do good and feel good poems
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Comment from Paul McFarland
A really good Mother's Day poem. Even though it might have been difficult to do, you mentioned that some mothers have a hard time being good moms.
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A really good Mother's Day poem. Even though it might have been difficult to do, you mentioned that some mothers have a hard time being good moms.
Comment Written 12-May-2023
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are filled with meaning. I found these words to be
beautiful, true and filled with love. Thank you for the author's notes -
I also believe this is true for Moms and Dads. The last line brought
tears to my eyes. The artwork is beautiful and goes well with the words
and theme of this poem. Happy Mother's Day!...Maria
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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The author's words are filled with meaning. I found these words to be
beautiful, true and filled with love. Thank you for the author's notes -
I also believe this is true for Moms and Dads. The last line brought
tears to my eyes. The artwork is beautiful and goes well with the words
and theme of this poem. Happy Mother's Day!...Maria
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Oh Maria, I thank you with all my heart for this lovely review and kind words for my Mom poem. Also for the gracious gift of extra stars. You are so sweet and I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend.
Comment from Wendy G
Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem about what it means to be a mother. I am glad you later looked for your mother and we're able to build a good relationship with her. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
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Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem about what it means to be a mother. I am glad you later looked for your mother and we're able to build a good relationship with her. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-May-2023
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi,
This is a well rhymed poem that tells the difference of the terms mother and mom. Though they are used interchangeably. Mom has a more loving feel now. Though in the old days it was always 'Mother" to show respect and love. This shows that giving a child up for adoption is a show of love if you make sure the child gets good parents.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
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Hi,
This is a well rhymed poem that tells the difference of the terms mother and mom. Though they are used interchangeably. Mom has a more loving feel now. Though in the old days it was always 'Mother" to show respect and love. This shows that giving a child up for adoption is a show of love if you make sure the child gets good parents.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 12-May-2023
Comment from papa55mike
Moms are extraordinary people who do everything they can to help their children become better humans. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Moms are extraordinary people who do everything they can to help their children become better humans. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thanks so much Mike.
I appreciate the kind review and words!
Comment from Regina Elliott
Dear Poet,
This is a lovely and loving
Mother's Day poem. It speaks
of the devotion and strength
it takes to be a wonderful
mother. Yes, some mothers
have difficult circumstances
and need to put their baby up
for adoption into a good home, but that takes a lot of
motherly love to do that.
May you have an inspirational
weekend. :)))))
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Dear Poet,
This is a lovely and loving
Mother's Day poem. It speaks
of the devotion and strength
it takes to be a wonderful
mother. Yes, some mothers
have difficult circumstances
and need to put their baby up
for adoption into a good home, but that takes a lot of
motherly love to do that.
May you have an inspirational
weekend. :)))))
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thanks so much Regina
I appreciate the kind review and words!
And lol, wasn't' t about to get on the abortion topic,
Comment from Sally Law
Mystery poetess, this is lovely poem for Mom's day and I suspect from one who knows. I had a great example as a mother, and she was very mommish, very loving and attentive. She worked 40 hours a week and commuted so gone a lot. When she was home she made it count.
Thank you for sharing and beautifully so. Happy Mother's/Mom's Day!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally Law :)) XOs
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Mystery poetess, this is lovely poem for Mom's day and I suspect from one who knows. I had a great example as a mother, and she was very mommish, very loving and attentive. She worked 40 hours a week and commuted so gone a lot. When she was home she made it count.
Thank you for sharing and beautifully so. Happy Mother's/Mom's Day!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally Law :)) XOs
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thanks so much Sally
I appreciate the kind review and words!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
This is a very sweet verse revealing what it means to be a mother, not just the giving birth, but the tender loving throughout the years. In your fourth stanza you have a grammar error (whose, not who's, and in the next line, it should read "are forced, plural). Minor corrections that will make this piece shine.
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reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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This is a very sweet verse revealing what it means to be a mother, not just the giving birth, but the tender loving throughout the years. In your fourth stanza you have a grammar error (whose, not who's, and in the next line, it should read "are forced, plural). Minor corrections that will make this piece shine.
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Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thanks so much Ginda.
First I just want to thank you for catching my errors, my vision has been causing a lot lately.
I appreciate the kind review and words as weff
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Well
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You are most welcome. We are here to help each other grow as writers. I know I always appreciate it when some catches an error or is willing to offer suggestions.
Comment from royowen
You're absolutely correct, anyone, or at least every woman has the ability to be a mother, but once the mother becomes a mum, that special download from God, called unconditional, kicks in, a lot of adoptive mums know that, it's the poured into a chil that creates a fit person, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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You're absolutely correct, anyone, or at least every woman has the ability to be a mother, but once the mother becomes a mum, that special download from God, called unconditional, kicks in, a lot of adoptive mums know that, it's the poured into a chil that creates a fit person, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thanks so much Roy,
I appreciate the kind review and words!
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A pleasure