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Comment from G0dd0ll
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Aw... This is so cute GF! I like it. But sometimes that ol mama bear has to come out and make an appearance, like it or not, she takes care a bizness!!! lol

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
    Thanks Sweetie! I do appreciate your very kind words! I hope you are doing well. And yes, mama bear and grandma bear, are very important. But please remember, always a friendship & care bear. K?
reply by G0dd0ll on 15-Apr-2023
    lol absolutely!
Comment from Janet Foor
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Sweet. Love your happy dance Debi. The picture made smile. We can all get in our Mama Bear mode when put to the test.
Fun poem and congrats on the win.
Blessings
J

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
    Thanks Hon, I do appreciate your very kind words! I hope you are doing well. And mama bear and grandma bear, are very important. But always a care bear friend! Hugs!
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This made me smile. I like the warning about the mama bear. Amazing how a joyful, smiling mama can suddenly be catapulted into anger and not just ordinary anger. No, the mama bear is a whole other level. Lol. This was cute and I'm glad you're happy. Gretchen

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
    Thanks Hon, I do appreciate your very kind words! I hope you are doing well. And mama bear and grandma bear, are very important. But always a care bear friend! Hugs!
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
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I love everything about this. From your flawless rhymes to the dancing bear- I enjoyed it all! I think this is perfect for a feelings poem contest and it certainly has my vote!! From one mama bear to another- thank you for sharing!!
<3
Jessica

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
    Thanks Hon, I do appreciate your very kind words! I hope you are doing well. And mama bear and grandma bear, are very important. But this care bear is missing a dance partner lately! Thank you for the bonus stars! Hugs!
Comment from Boogienights
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Such a happy poem, I'm so glad you feel this way. I love the dancing bear, it lends to your delightful words. Your family is lucky to have you, thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
    Thanks so much for the kind words for my happy poem! Much appreciated, dear friend!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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This poem put a big smile on my face with the dancing bear and funky moves. Very clever as is the rhyming story this poem portrays happily :-) Third stanza is funny too. Thank you for the giggle and good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
    Thanks dear friend for your kind words for my poem
Comment from Jim Wile
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Hey, this was great, and I loved your gif too. This was a wonderful entry in the happy poem contest, which I'm happy to see. I much prefer happy poems to some of the gloomy ones we often see here on FS. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
    Thanks Jim, I do appreciate your very kind words! I hope you are doing well. And mama bear and grandma bear, are very important. But always a care bear friend! Hugs!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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May your day be filled with bliss and kisses for having written a piece well-worth listening to. What better way to start the day than Frrin whistling his tune?

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
    Thanks Tom, I do appreciate your very kind words! I hope you are doing well. And mama bear and grandma bear, are very important. But always a care bear friend! Hugs!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I thought this poem was lovely, it made me smile, I imagined you as the happy bear, like the one in the picture, that is so cute! I enjoyed your happy poem, and wish you the best of luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
    Hi Sandra, I do appreciate your very kind words! I hope you are doing well. I am a mama & grandma bear which are very important. But always a care bear friend! Hugs!
Comment from Julie Lau
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That's so cute! and happy! And unusual. As an ignorant Australian, may I ask, is that bear real? Or is it you in a bear suit? They are very popular here for parties, but wouldn't fool anyone! JL

 Comment Written 14-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
    Hi Julie, I don't think it's real and not a silly question at all.. I appreciate your very kind words! I hope you are doing well. I am a mama and grandma bear, who are very important. But always a care bear friend! Hugs!