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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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You did a great job with this tribute to Jessica. I loved reading it,
Debi. You described her well. Your words were descriptive and
straight from your heart. I liked the style you used, too. It worked
perfectly for this informative poem. Your words flowed smoothly
line to line and verse to verse. I believe Jessica will be awed by
your poem and rightly so. You gave readers great info that they
won't read on her profile page. I have read her work and reviewed
some and she has done the same. The picture is precious. I liked
the line about mama bear. She exudes every trait you mentioned
in a positive way.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
    Thank you Jan. We just got back from taking the boys next door out to eat. Jason and Mel are in Vegas at a convention for work, and I saw that you had text me a few changes, so I will look at them here soon since we just got home. Thank you for that and always, as I had to rush it at the end to get it posted and get ready to go. Thanks also for the six stars. Always so appreciative for that hon, and always you too. Thanks again
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
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I'm not crying...... haha Debi<3 To say that I am honored by your recognition would be an extreme understatement.. Your extraordinary qualities such as your kindness, good intentions, compassion, strength, talent (I could go on and on) are not often seen and almost never in one person!! I am not one to shy away from expressing my feelings... Shocker. And my admiration though previously conveyed, only grows for you..and hope you know this. Women like you have a profound impact on the lives of those they touch.. I consider myself blessed to have had the opportunity to meet and know you. My appreciation for you is unwavering!! So, anticipate me expressing this repeatedly. ;)
thank you my friend
Jessica

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
    Awe Jessica, thank you so much for your kind words for your poem. There is something you should know about me and that is that after I post, I change things for a day or two, consistently. So I hope you don't mind. I just saw that Morgan's line was kind of boring, so I made it a little more like the writer that she is becoming. I don't want to add too much so people will still read, but will give that some thought tonight.
    Thanks for the six stars too for your poem. You are so worth it, lol.
reply by Jessica Wheeler on 21-Mar-2023
    I just wanted to tell you how amazing you are! I'm just reading through these comments again, as there are more than when I last looked, and they are so nice, I feel beyond honored. Your replies though, blow me away. It just means the world to me that you did this, for no other reason, other than to introduce me and get my work read. There are very few people that have such pure intentions in this world. I'm just so grateful to you!
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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This is a delightful introduction to a new writer for FanStory. She is cute, and so are her daughters. I know you would get along well with another Mama Bear!

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
    Hahaha! Leave it up to you to pick up on the mama bear similarities. Thanks so much for your sweet review for Jessica, dear Verna, There are so many that I would love to recognize, but you are high on my list, so if I still have any music left in my muse tomorrow, I am going to give it another go.
    Thanks again sweet friend.
reply by Verna Cole Mitchell on 16-Mar-2023
    Love you, sweet lady. You make me smile.
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Debi, thank you for introducing us to Jessica. As always, your arms are opened and welcoming. I that hope she'll make FS her new second home. Your poem reads and flows well, and I can feel your admiration for Jessica, her work, and her life. Of special note:

She never will say yes, to a maybe or a guess
(OMG. She should have been a realtor--a maybe will never do. Lol.)

Beautiful family photo. Good rhyming. A pleasure to read.
Well done. Xo. M




 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
    Like Kenzie used to say, grandma you silly goose. It would be just like you to see that from the eyes of a realtor, hhmmmm, wonder why that is?
    Thank you my wonderful SOTU for the great review. You are the best my sweet sis and friend!!
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This is an awesome and cool concept of devoting your talents to the women of Fanstory. What is her user name. I would love to check out her work. I'm sure she is stoked to be written about. Thanks for posting. Gretchen

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
    Thanks so much Gretchen. I will be trying to get to as many of the awesome women that I have grown so close to. I feel like you are an old friend and so will be doing some in groups as not to forget mine who never forget me. Thanks for always being there for my posts, sweet friend. And for your kind words for Jessica's poem.
Comment from Terry Broxson
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Debi, when I first started reading this, I thought, dang, Debi has a new grandkid, but (being a little slow, I am an old guy) I figured out who you were writing about. I have read some of her stuff. She can be a six machine, because she can write. Good job! Terry.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
    Hahaha! Yes, Jessica and I hit it off right from the start and she seemed so much different than some of the other newbies that we have encountered. And yes, one with talent without an attitude is so refreshing. So I thought that she deserved to be shown a little respect for being so respectful. Not to mention we have an amazing amount of life similarities. Thanks Terry for the very kind comments for Jess and her poem.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Debi, no I haven't come across Jessica Wheeler, but I think it's a great gesture that you introduce this new writer to us. I will certainly look her up. A big hug, Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
    Hi there Ulla, as always you are the greatest. Your kind reviews are always some of my favorite to read and I appreciate this one as much as all the others. Thanks for your wonderful comments for Jessica the woman and for her poem. You are awesome!
Comment from Sally Law
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Aw, so very sweet of you to feature Jessica Wheeler in your tribute. I am just getting to know her a little bit through you. Look at those beautiful children, Morgan and Cami. She's loved, talented and blessed! Thank you for sharing her through your loving eyes of appreciation, Debi dear.

Blessings to you all.
Love,
BBB XOs

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
    Hey there my sweet and loyal friend. As always you are the sweetest. Your kind reviews are always some of my favorite to read and I appreciate this one as much as all the others. Thanks for your wonderful comments for Jessica the woman and for her poem. You are awesome!
Comment from w.j.debi
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I've read a few of Jessica's works and I think you are right, she is here to stay. She is a talented writer and seems to be dipping her pen in all sorts topics.
This is a great way to honor a new member.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
    Hi there my sweet name twin! You are the greatest. Your kind reviews are always some of my favorite to read and I appreciate this one as much as all the others. Thanks for your wonderful comments for Jessica the woman and for her poem. You are awesome!
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Thank you, Debi, for sharing this lovely picture and a great poem about Jessica. Not sure if I have read any of her writings yet, but will check and see if I can find them.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
    Hi Anne, you are the greatest. Your kind reviews are always some of my favorite to read and I appreciate this one as much as all the others. Thanks for your wonderful comments for Jessica the woman and for her poem. You are awesome!
reply by Anne Johnston on 16-Mar-2023
    You are welcome, Debi.