Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "My search for the Leprechaun"Musing of an old man
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Comment from John Ciarmello
And a Happy St. Paddy's Day to you! I love the green and instant eye-catcher. Your words blend perfectly with the bright color of this piece--from Fergus Bay to Tullamore county. I'm Happy he found his Leprechaun in that bottle of Tullamore D.E.W. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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And a Happy St. Paddy's Day to you! I love the green and instant eye-catcher. Your words blend perfectly with the bright color of this piece--from Fergus Bay to Tullamore county. I'm Happy he found his Leprechaun in that bottle of Tullamore D.E.W. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Thanks John C.
Comment from Ulla
Hahaha, I can well.imagine. this was a fun poem, and a great entry for the contest. What is more, it's also very well written. I really enjoyed it. All the best of luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Hahaha, I can well.imagine. this was a fun poem, and a great entry for the contest. What is more, it's also very well written. I really enjoyed it. All the best of luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Ulla, thank you!
Comment from GWHARGIS
I love the adventurous feel to this poem. The descriptive images of the trek through the countryside made me seen the lush green of Ireland. Using the background color was a clever way of further embellishing that imagery. Very fun poem to read. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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I love the adventurous feel to this poem. The descriptive images of the trek through the countryside made me seen the lush green of Ireland. Using the background color was a clever way of further embellishing that imagery. Very fun poem to read. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Gretchen, thank you!☘️
Comment from victor 66
I am not Irish, but I love St. Patrick's Day. I don't drink green beer, but I do like my Guinness stout. Your poem is very beautiful and I liked it very much. I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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I am not Irish, but I love St. Patrick's Day. I don't drink green beer, but I do like my Guinness stout. Your poem is very beautiful and I liked it very much. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Victor, thank you. ☘️
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You are most, JLR.
Comment from susand3022
LOLOL... You're either from Boston or Ireland, author! lol
I hear it said in plenty, that if you can still see the floor, you're not drunk. Well, I suppose the gentleman of the poem wasn't drunk at all if he could still see the gold buckles of the Leprechaun's shoes! :)
A fun poem with a fun ending!
Susan :)
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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LOLOL... You're either from Boston or Ireland, author! lol
I hear it said in plenty, that if you can still see the floor, you're not drunk. Well, I suppose the gentleman of the poem wasn't drunk at all if he could still see the gold buckles of the Leprechaun's shoes! :)
A fun poem with a fun ending!
Susan :)
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Smiles back... and yes I am all things Irish 🍀 ☘️☘️ Born on the sod and from the sod, I shall return.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a creative poem as you go in search of the Leprechaun in Ireland. If I ever get to Ireland now I know how to go about finding that rascal. You have go to pub and drink until he appears.
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This is a creative poem as you go in search of the Leprechaun in Ireland. If I ever get to Ireland now I know how to go about finding that rascal. You have go to pub and drink until he appears.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Smiling back, that you be the ticket! ☘️☘️
Comment from rjuselius
This is a brilliant entry for the contest dear anonymous! Unfortunately i am not familiar to the places you produce. But a fine poem altogether.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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This is a brilliant entry for the contest dear anonymous! Unfortunately i am not familiar to the places you produce. But a fine poem altogether.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses,
Rebekka x
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Blessings and a hug wit smiles back, thank you!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I rest assured this work of poetic art wasn't born in a day/ Very well done. Are you now or ever have been in Erin? Have you a shamrock in your pocket, and a Shillelagh by your side? Well done, and worthy of an additional star.
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I rest assured this work of poetic art wasn't born in a day/ Very well done. Are you now or ever have been in Erin? Have you a shamrock in your pocket, and a Shillelagh by your side? Well done, and worthy of an additional star.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Born of the sod and destined to return to the sod, I am, if nothing else, an Irishman.
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Has Erin snakes today?
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Unusual but yet true, no native snakes exist, much like New Zealnd and Greenland.
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is it the leaf, the talk or the flower/bud that is edible, and if the flower do they stain teeth? I did not give you four strs, did I?
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
I love this trip through Ireland- one of my favourite places! I had a grandmother who was Irish. Even the place names are romantic and magical! Just check/ edit the odd typing error eg 'Patrick' in the heading and 'shepherd' in the text.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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I love this trip through Ireland- one of my favourite places! I had a grandmother who was Irish. Even the place names are romantic and magical! Just check/ edit the odd typing error eg 'Patrick' in the heading and 'shepherd' in the text.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Thank you..
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Best wishes from UK!
Comment from Kaiku
I never met an Irishman who walked out of a bar let alone one of the little people! You must have been there to come up with the line of Irish charm so writ. May the luck of the Irish bring a bit of Dew upon your lips.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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I never met an Irishman who walked out of a bar let alone one of the little people! You must have been there to come up with the line of Irish charm so writ. May the luck of the Irish bring a bit of Dew upon your lips.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2023
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Kaiku, I was born on the sod and the sod I someday will return, so, yes, all things Irish in my DNA... ☘️