Landay Story
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Comment from Nicki Nance
Just brilliant. The bridge to nowhere in the photo is the perfect accompaniment to the syllab-- to silence. The joke is on the little landau that couldn't successfully challenge you. Nicely done.
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Just brilliant. The bridge to nowhere in the photo is the perfect accompaniment to the syllab-- to silence. The joke is on the little landau that couldn't successfully challenge you. Nicely done.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Nicki
Comment from Sally Law
Bill, this is just so perfect and so you. How fun this is and you rose to the occasion swimmingly. It's nice to see a different form of poetry.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal :)))
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Bill, this is just so perfect and so you. How fun this is and you rose to the occasion swimmingly. It's nice to see a different form of poetry.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal :)))
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Sal
Comment from patricia dillon
Ha ha. This is very amusing actually. I entered this contest and immediately ran into trouble with the number of syllables. You managed it very dexterously.
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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Ha ha. This is very amusing actually. I entered this contest and immediately ran into trouble with the number of syllables. You managed it very dexterously.
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Patricia
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You're welcome
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Bill,
This is a great Landay poem; you have all the elements, including wit and sarcasm.
Are you from Pennsylvania? I'm wondering because the Kinzua bridge in PA looks like this. It was torn apart by a small rogue tornado.
Great writing, Bill. Thank you for the smile.ð???
Cindy
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Bill,
This is a great Landay poem; you have all the elements, including wit and sarcasm.
Are you from Pennsylvania? I'm wondering because the Kinzua bridge in PA looks like this. It was torn apart by a small rogue tornado.
Great writing, Bill. Thank you for the smile.ð???
Cindy
Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2023
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Thanks, Cindy. I?m in Michigan.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a new form for me but I read the rules. You've got your nine syllables on the first line and the thirteen required for the second line. I think that is a pretty sarcastic way of ending this. It is at the very least creative.
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This is a new form for me but I read the rules. You've got your nine syllables on the first line and the thirteen required for the second line. I think that is a pretty sarcastic way of ending this. It is at the very least creative.
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Comment Written 28-Feb-2023
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I always shoot to be thought of as one who does the very least.