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Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Jesus vs satan"Do good and feel good poems
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Comment from Jim Wile
This was an excellent poem which followed the rules of this distinctive form beautifully. Your words were well-chosen to represent these two dialectical opponents. Great picture too. Well done!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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This was an excellent poem which followed the rules of this distinctive form beautifully. Your words were well-chosen to represent these two dialectical opponents. Great picture too. Well done!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Jim, you are always so kind and I always look forward to hearing from. you, as I know you will have kind comments and sometimes kind feedback.
Either way, always so respectful and so appreciated, my dear friend.
Comment from Sally Law
Wow, mystery poet, you penned a clear choice in this unique and challenging form! I choose life and light in the Lord always. You can be sure I'll be praying and staying with God. ;))
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best in the upcoming contest.
Sister Sally and the brethren XOs
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Wow, mystery poet, you penned a clear choice in this unique and challenging form! I choose life and light in the Lord always. You can be sure I'll be praying and staying with God. ;))
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best in the upcoming contest.
Sister Sally and the brethren XOs
Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Sally, I cannot thank you enough for your incredible review, lovely comments and generous gift of six stars. You can't know how very much I appreciate it. Thank you again my dear friend!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I agree with you about satan. He doesn't deserve the honour.
I really enjoyed reading your contest entry, it was very well worked out and I particularly liked the use of Praying and Preying, when used with God and satan. Well done for that. I've never heard of the Tyburn form. It's a lovely style. Well done and I wish you good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
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I agree with you about satan. He doesn't deserve the honour.
I really enjoyed reading your contest entry, it was very well worked out and I particularly liked the use of Praying and Preying, when used with God and satan. Well done for that. I've never heard of the Tyburn form. It's a lovely style. Well done and I wish you good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
Comment from Tom Horonzy
One would also think that after six millennia the old sod would say enough. No mas! He needs to realize though the battle rages who the winner will be.
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One would also think that after six millennia the old sod would say enough. No mas! He needs to realize though the battle rages who the winner will be.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very good job with the Tyburn prompt. You have picked two very good subjects for your poem. This creates a good contrast. The picture is also well chosen.
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Very good job with the Tyburn prompt. You have picked two very good subjects for your poem. This creates a good contrast. The picture is also well chosen.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2023
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
You have written a well-conceived example of a Tyburn poetry entry. You seem to have followed the guidelines. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand except for the concept of "slaying brands". I like the contrasting final lines.
The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023
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You have written a well-conceived example of a Tyburn poetry entry. You seem to have followed the guidelines. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and easy to understand except for the concept of "slaying brands". I like the contrasting final lines.
The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2023
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Sandra, that was a typo which was supposed to read bands. As in bands of people. However I didn't care for that much either, but I do like what it says now. Please let me know what you think.....And thank you my sweet friend!
Jesus with Grace ~ Praying, Staying God
satan disgrace - preying, slaying fraud
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You are welcome. That wording is much better. Good luck!
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Mystery Author,
I especially like the closeness of spelling in Jesus "praying" and Satan "preying". The first thing that Jesus always did was to pray. He tackled things that way. Many Christians don't know the power of prayer. But Satan the deceiver, Satan the liar, Satan the tempter... he preys on people. And he stays busy, all over the world.
Thanks for sharing this Tyburn. It should do very well in the contest, and I wish you Good Luck!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Hi Mystery Author,
I especially like the closeness of spelling in Jesus "praying" and Satan "preying". The first thing that Jesus always did was to pray. He tackled things that way. Many Christians don't know the power of prayer. But Satan the deceiver, Satan the liar, Satan the tempter... he preys on people. And he stays busy, all over the world.
Thanks for sharing this Tyburn. It should do very well in the contest, and I wish you Good Luck!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2023
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Hi Kimbob, I have to apologize because I found a few strays that I know I thanked at one time, but they popped up in my reviewed list as not been responded to. I talked to Tom about it, and he suggested clearing my cache in my browser. So that is why you never got thanked for this.
I am so sorry, because your review for this meant so much to me. ~. And most of all for your understanding!
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That's okay, Debi. I know how hard it is to thank everybody for their reviews. It's the reason I don't post very much. I'm too busy thanking reviewers and building up my promotion pot!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well done Tyburn poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. I do not capitalize anything to do with the devil either. Very good words and imagery. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
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This is a very well done Tyburn poem you have penned for the writing prompt contest. I do not capitalize anything to do with the devil either. Very good words and imagery. Best wishes in the contest! Teri
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
Comment from nomi338
The difference between the two could not be any clearer. Whichever one you find it easy to follow clearly defines who you are. Jesus declared to the hypocritical religious leaders of his day that they were vipers, children of their father Satan the Devil. They responded by having him put to death. Satan may have rejoiced for a short time, but after the three days were over and Christ had risen, the Devil knew for certain that he was finished.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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The difference between the two could not be any clearer. Whichever one you find it easy to follow clearly defines who you are. Jesus declared to the hypocritical religious leaders of his day that they were vipers, children of their father Satan the Devil. They responded by having him put to death. Satan may have rejoiced for a short time, but after the three days were over and Christ had risen, the Devil knew for certain that he was finished.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2023
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Thanks Nomi! I appreciate your kind review my dear friend!
Comment from harmony13
The author's message is extremely clear. I like how the author used the word pray for Jesus and for satan used the word prey! Very clever! The
examples given are very creative. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork goes well with the words and theme of this poem.
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The author's message is extremely clear. I like how the author used the word pray for Jesus and for satan used the word prey! Very clever! The
examples given are very creative. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork goes well with the words and theme of this poem.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2023