One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mintybee
Overall, good. The lines all work together well, and it's a touching look at human relationships. I counted 26 syllables, which is one too many. Thank you for clarifying that "window pain" was on purpose, so I didn't have to wonder. A sad and well done poem.
Mintybee
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Overall, good. The lines all work together well, and it's a touching look at human relationships. I counted 26 syllables, which is one too many. Thank you for clarifying that "window pain" was on purpose, so I didn't have to wonder. A sad and well done poem.
Mintybee
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Comment Written 31-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much! I appreciate your thoughtful review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy