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None Shall Pass

if I'm lyin', I'm dyin'

30 total reviews 
Comment from patricia dillon
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I thought it was funny too. President Trump seems to evoke strong feelings on both sides. But as a foreigner, it is not really my business. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
reply by patricia dillon on 20-Jan-2023
    You're welcome
Comment from damommy
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You probably don't want to know what would have happened. Don't let her size or age fool you. Us old folks can be mean! lol. I certainly got a laugh out of this. Thank you for sharing it.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from royowen
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That woman could have we been my mum, she was 4'12 and absolutely fearless, she could make thuggish youths tremble with her reprimands, she seemed more like am army recruit's drill sergeant than my my mother, beautiful written Earl. Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much Roy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Jim Wile
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Absolutely it was funny! I can picture it well. A very good entry in this flash non-fiction contest. It is interesting to think about what she would have done had you answered the other way. That might have been just as funny!

(need a closing " following President Trump)

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work. Good catch on the quotation mark.
Comment from Shirley McLain
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That is our world today, and I think it stinks. In my opinion, Trump is this country's black eye. I hate the division, but I guess I am part of it. You did a great job as always. Have a blessed afternoon. Shirley

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much Shirley. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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As the guard of her kingdom, the lady in the doorway probably would have shut the door in your face, never caring about the veteran inside, if you had been the one to write things she didn't agree with. I'm glad you passed the test and was able to conduct your interview. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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Oh, I don't know about that. I am a five foot 88 year old
Octogenarian and I guess I am pretty formidable. Some family members have mentioned they respect my space. LOL I suppose that would be funny. Good story. Nancy:)

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much Nancy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Wils
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By the sound of her I'm surprised you didn't have a shotgun pointed at you and forced to say no. As tough a biddy as they come. An entertaining read.
Geoff

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much Geoff. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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This flash fictiondoes paint a funny scene. She sounds like she was some tough cookie who doesn't hesitate to stand by her convictions. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Ben Colder
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No doubt you would have received more than bargained for. Other than the door slamming in your face no doubt you would have endured a good cussing as well. Oh, well, Life goes on!.

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2023
    Thank you very much Ben. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.