Heart Crafted Poems - 2023
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Constant change"Musing of an old man
36 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and very well written 3 Line poem you have penned for the contest. This is a very good nature poem that is so true. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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This is a very nice and very well written 3 Line poem you have penned for the contest. This is a very good nature poem that is so true. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
A great little poem. The drawing you used is so perfect as are your words that points out there is so much more to the tree than you see or realize. Good job.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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A great little poem. The drawing you used is so perfect as are your words that points out there is so much more to the tree than you see or realize. Good job.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Anne Johnston
I like your words for this contest. Great picture. Just as the trees seem stand bare in winter, they are still growing. So we must constantly move forward in our lives.
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I like your words for this contest. Great picture. Just as the trees seem stand bare in winter, they are still growing. So we must constantly move forward in our lives.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thanks Anne!
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You are welcome
Comment from Boogienights
How wonderful, a great perspective on how a tree and man are constantly changing. They both are always growing, shedding thier outer layer and starting again. A terrific contest entry, best of luck.
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How wonderful, a great perspective on how a tree and man are constantly changing. They both are always growing, shedding thier outer layer and starting again. A terrific contest entry, best of luck.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
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Smiles back with a great attitude of gratitude.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery paints a good word picture of the winter scene.
-Good use of personification and simile at the end.
-You make a good point about change and adapting to it, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery paints a good word picture of the winter scene.
-Good use of personification and simile at the end.
-You make a good point about change and adapting to it, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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Thank you, Pam!
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You are welcome, Jim.
Comment from zanya
A thought-provoking reflection here on life and Nature, though - the poetic format is a mere three lines - lovely pic to illustrate and thanks for sharing
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A thought-provoking reflection here on life and Nature, though - the poetic format is a mere three lines - lovely pic to illustrate and thanks for sharing
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
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Thanks much!
Comment from Aussie
The seasons change and we must adapt to that change.
If we take a leaf from the animal's book of moving on, we too can change easily - just like the birds flying south for the winter.
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The seasons change and we must adapt to that change.
If we take a leaf from the animal's book of moving on, we too can change easily - just like the birds flying south for the winter.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2023
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aah yes you are also in the midst of seasonal changes.
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We are in high summer and the birds fly north to the warmth of jungles. K xx
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it is quite interesting to read about your continent with it being 70% arid and your tropical area is to the north. Still you do have four rather distinct seasons. That is quite something.
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Yes, but the seasons are unstable. At present the Army have come to help with the floods - weather changes all over the world. K xx
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your art choice and well-chosen words paired well, JLR.
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Your descriptive
words didn't even need a picture, though it enhanced
your poem. Great job with the syllable count per line.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Your art choice and well-chosen words paired well, JLR.
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Your descriptive
words didn't even need a picture, though it enhanced
your poem. Great job with the syllable count per line.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The trees, like the birds and the bees accept change easily, whereas man complaints and stubbornly wants to change something that is impossible to change. The trees have amazing resilience, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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The trees, like the birds and the bees accept change easily, whereas man complaints and stubbornly wants to change something that is impossible to change. The trees have amazing resilience, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
The oak is a symbol of strength but also subject to the challenges of winter and all the changing seasons. The poem fulfils the conditions of the competition. I think you need an apostrophe in 'Winter's'
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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The oak is a symbol of strength but also subject to the challenges of winter and all the changing seasons. The poem fulfils the conditions of the competition. I think you need an apostrophe in 'Winter's'
Comment Written 04-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2023
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Thank you.