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Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, what a fun write. It was very thoughtful of your husband to do what he did - knowing how worn out you were from visits with your mon. And so you came to the house and there was real thanksgiving food! I admired rhyming, meter, imagery, visuals and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Oh, what a fun write. It was very thoughtful of your husband to do what he did - knowing how worn out you were from visits with your mon. And so you came to the house and there was real thanksgiving food! I admired rhyming, meter, imagery, visuals and presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thanks my sweet friend for such kind words for my poem. It was one year I did appreciate him pulling this prank on me or I would have insisted on doing it all myself. I appreciate your kindness and I thank you again my friend.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, this poem is so sweet and endearing and is in the true spirit of Thanksgiving. I think if it were me, your mom would have had a hard time getting rid of me--thinking about a fish fry for Thanksgiving. Lol.
Well done, well told. This poem made me smile, but one Question:
Even the deer hearts on a stick
(What's this all about? If it doesn't come from a butcher, count me out - lol.)
As this is a contest entry, wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Hello author, this poem is so sweet and endearing and is in the true spirit of Thanksgiving. I think if it were me, your mom would have had a hard time getting rid of me--thinking about a fish fry for Thanksgiving. Lol.
Well done, well told. This poem made me smile, but one Question:
Even the deer hearts on a stick
(What's this all about? If it doesn't come from a butcher, count me out - lol.)
As this is a contest entry, wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much Margaret for your lovely review and sweet comments for my poem. I appreciate them so much, just as I do your six stars. Thank you again my dear sotu!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Make a wish. Wouldn't you, as a mother, have something done unto yourself as you have done so many times unto another. Yes ... and no. The joy I think moms enjoy is giving herself to those she loves. Still, having it returned, even once is or was a blessing as told here.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Make a wish. Wouldn't you, as a mother, have something done unto yourself as you have done so many times unto another. Yes ... and no. The joy I think moms enjoy is giving herself to those she loves. Still, having it returned, even once is or was a blessing as told here.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Awe, thank you so very much Tom!. You are always so sweet and I appreciate your very kind words. It truly was a hard time on me and my hubby knew I would have done it all myself if he didn't fool me. I was so happy when I found out we weren't having deer heats on a stick. He was trying to make me more appalled so I wanted to be gone that morning.
It is always so nice to hear from you and have you review my posts. So appreciated! Thank you again my dear friend. Thanks for your good luck wishes. I am one down from being tied for first so not so bad.
Comment from Sally Law
This is a hoot and a holler, mystery poet! How'd my Georgia relatives seep into your story, I wonder? Holiday brings out the best and worst in us, I suppose. Thankfully, there's pie and beer to please everyone.
Sending you my best today as always and my very best for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :)) XOs
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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This is a hoot and a holler, mystery poet! How'd my Georgia relatives seep into your story, I wonder? Holiday brings out the best and worst in us, I suppose. Thankfully, there's pie and beer to please everyone.
Sending you my best today as always and my very best for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :)) XOs
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Awe, thank you so very much Sally!. You are always so sweet and I appreciate your very lovely words. It truly was a hard time on me and my hubby knew I would have done it all myself if he didn't fool me. I was so happy when I found out we weren't having deer hearts on a stick. He was trying to make me more appalled so I wanted to be gone that morning.
It is always so nice to hear from you and have you review my posts. So appreciated!
Thank you again my dear friend.
Comment from Begin Again
How wonderful! I can't imagine my family doing something so awesome, but I can dream that they would. I think they would say "cancel the day" because none of them want to clean, cook, or be responsible for anything but eat!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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How wonderful! I can't imagine my family doing something so awesome, but I can dream that they would. I think they would say "cancel the day" because none of them want to clean, cook, or be responsible for anything but eat!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Awe, thank you so very much Carol!. You are always so sweet and I appreciate your very lovely words. It truly was a hard time on me and my hubby knew I would have done it all myself if he didn't fool me. I was so happy when I found out we weren't having deer hearts on a stick. He was trying to make me more appalled so I wanted to be gone that morning..
So appreciated your kind review.
Thank you again my friend.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
How wonderful! It's lovely to know they care that much, and can see what you are going through trying to care for your mother as well as the family. I'm sure this will be a memory that you'll treasure forever. Aw, that was a lovely story to read. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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How wonderful! It's lovely to know they care that much, and can see what you are going through trying to care for your mother as well as the family. I'm sure this will be a memory that you'll treasure forever. Aw, that was a lovely story to read. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Awe, thank you so very much Sandra!. You are always so sweet and I appreciate your very lovely words. It truly was a hard time on me and my hubby knew I would have done it all myself if he didn't foool me. I was so happy when I found out we weren't having deer heats on a stick. He was trying to make me more appalled so I wanted to be gone that morning.
It is always so nice to hear from you and have you review my posts. So appreciated!
Thank you again my dear friend.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry to the Thanksgiving Poem Contest. The text is a nice size. The message is clearly stated, and the story is so well-told. The rhyme scheme is great.
I would press enter a couple times after the last sentence to make the poem more balanced in the poem box. The visual is cute and fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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This is a good entry to the Thanksgiving Poem Contest. The text is a nice size. The message is clearly stated, and the story is so well-told. The rhyme scheme is great.
I would press enter a couple times after the last sentence to make the poem more balanced in the poem box. The visual is cute and fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Awe, thank you so very much Sandra!. You are always so sweet and I appreciate your very lovely words. It truly was a hard time on me and my hubby knew I would have done it all myself if he didn't fool me. I was so happy when I found out we weren't having deer hearts on a stick. He was trying to make me more appalled so I wanted to be gone that morning..
So appreciated your kind review.
Thank you again my friend.
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It was a pleasant outcome to that trick. You are welcome.
Comment from Sanku
That was wonderful! What a loving family .You are lucky to have such a united family
The poem flowed well with the alternate lines rhyming effortlessly .Thanks for posting .God bless!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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That was wonderful! What a loving family .You are lucky to have such a united family
The poem flowed well with the alternate lines rhyming effortlessly .Thanks for posting .God bless!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Awe, thank you so very much Santha!. You are always so sweet and I appreciate your very lovely words. It truly was a hard time on me and my hubby knew I would have done it all myself if he didn't fool me. I was so happy when I found out we weren't having deer hearts on a stick. Lol!
He was trying to make me more appalled so I wanted to be gone that morning.. So appreciated your kind review.
Thank you again my dear friend.
Comment from Wendy G
That was a lovely token of love for you, which makes it more special than ever. You created a fine poem to tell the story, although I did find the font very heavy, making it a bit hard to read. Otherwise excellent. Best wishes.
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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That was a lovely token of love for you, which makes it more special than ever. You created a fine poem to tell the story, although I did find the font very heavy, making it a bit hard to read. Otherwise excellent. Best wishes.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Awe, thank you so very much Wendy!. You are always so sweet and I appreciate your very lovely words. It truly was a hard time on me and my hubby knew I would have done it all myself if he didn't fool me. I was so happy when I found out we weren't having deer hearts on a stick. He was trying to make me more appalled so I wanted to be gone that morning..
So appreciated your kind review.
Thank you again my dear friend.
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a fun take on a Thanksgiving meal that one wouldn't really look forward to, particularly the fish and deer hearts on a stick.
Luckily it was the family trying to pull one over on a traditional Thanksgiving meal.
Just one typo here:
I know your (you're) sad that she is sick
Much luck in the booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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This is a fun take on a Thanksgiving meal that one wouldn't really look forward to, particularly the fish and deer hearts on a stick.
Luckily it was the family trying to pull one over on a traditional Thanksgiving meal.
Just one typo here:
I know your (you're) sad that she is sick
Much luck in the booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Awe, thank you so very much Gloria!. You are always so sweet and I appreciate your very lovely words. It truly was a hard time on me and my hubby knew I would have done it all myself if he didn't fool me. I was so happy when I found out we weren't having deer hearts on a stick. He was trying to make me more appalled so I wanted to be gone that morning.
It is always so nice to hear from you and have you review my posts. So appreciated! Thanks also for the good luck wishes in the booth. I am one away from being tied for first so not doing too bad with just a little time left.
Thank you again my dear friend.