One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Very good descriptive imagery, like
"harvest moon bleeds outside."
-Good nature imagery with the moon, land, and sea.
-A good question at the end as she thinks about
the distance between them, and wonders.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Very good descriptive imagery, like
"harvest moon bleeds outside."
-Good nature imagery with the moon, land, and sea.
-A good question at the end as she thinks about
the distance between them, and wonders.
-Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, Pam. I appreciate your time and kind review.
Gypsy
"A sunset is the sun's fiery kiss to the night." -Crystal Woods
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You are welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Well, alright Ms. Gypsy. This is a different type of poem from you. I like it. It still has that Gypsy flavor~ few words but a powerful message. It also has your standard, beautiful presentation. How do you get that beautiful scroll design on your poems? Good luck in the contest. You have a good entry.
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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Well, alright Ms. Gypsy. This is a different type of poem from you. I like it. It still has that Gypsy flavor~ few words but a powerful message. It also has your standard, beautiful presentation. How do you get that beautiful scroll design on your poems? Good luck in the contest. You have a good entry.
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Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, Ms Sandy. I appreciate your time and kind review. I search for page breakers with black background. It takes a while to find the right ones. I have some I can give you but I am not sure how to, they are HTML links. I can send you instructions if you would like to learn. You would have to get a couple of programs, ImageShack and Paint.
I appreciate that you take the time to read and review my poems, thank you, Ms. Sandy.
Gypsy
"A sunset is the sun's fiery kiss to the night." -Crystal Woods
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I have paint already. I hate to add too much to my old computer. I have the directions from you for adding the extra photos. I haven't used it yet because I am not that computer savvy. You are welcome. I enjoy reading your poems.