The Return
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Comment from alexisleech
Another great chapter, Sandra. As I've said so often before, you manage to draw in the reader so easily with your descriptive content and excellent dialogue - all wrapped up in a plot that twists and turns with every chapter.
Perfect!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Another great chapter, Sandra. As I've said so often before, you manage to draw in the reader so easily with your descriptive content and excellent dialogue - all wrapped up in a plot that twists and turns with every chapter.
Perfect!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, Alexis. Thank you so very much for your fabulous review, and the golden star, I always enjoy reading them. Love and hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from estory
Miles seems to be realizing how complicated life can be as his father reveals the motivation for his trying to ruin Meg's father and break up the marriage. And then Margot and Bessie are still trying to follow various leads in the trail to discover the real murderer. Or would be murderer. The plot thickens. estory
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Miles seems to be realizing how complicated life can be as his father reveals the motivation for his trying to ruin Meg's father and break up the marriage. And then Margot and Bessie are still trying to follow various leads in the trail to discover the real murderer. Or would be murderer. The plot thickens. estory
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part, Estory, and really appreciate your lovely review. The women will have to get cracking if they are going to solve this in time. Thanks, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from royowen
What does one do with the anger after one has cornered perpetrators of a crime, particularly if it's one's own parents, how devastating, one would wonder if the evil that is in one's parents isin them, but it is down to choices, all of us are potentially evil or good, but the shame, what does one do with it? You've created a great dilemma Sandra, aren't people wonderfully complex and yet capable of such evil, well done, Sandra, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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What does one do with the anger after one has cornered perpetrators of a crime, particularly if it's one's own parents, how devastating, one would wonder if the evil that is in one's parents isin them, but it is down to choices, all of us are potentially evil or good, but the shame, what does one do with it? You've created a great dilemma Sandra, aren't people wonderfully complex and yet capable of such evil, well done, Sandra, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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This is where choice comes into it. God gave us that in the hope we choose wisely. So many don't. It's so sad. But, as with Miles, children don't always follow their parents example, thank goodness.
Thank you so much for this lovely review, my friend, I really appreciate it. Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
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That?s true
Comment from John Ciarmello
I'm so happy in a selfish way that all of this is starting to unravel right into the palms of my hands, lol. So much to still consider and ponder, though. I'm curious about Meg's reaction to Miles's news. How good of an actress is she? However, there are some things she doesn't know yet. Great chapter, Sandra. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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I'm so happy in a selfish way that all of this is starting to unravel right into the palms of my hands, lol. So much to still consider and ponder, though. I'm curious about Meg's reaction to Miles's news. How good of an actress is she? However, there are some things she doesn't know yet. Great chapter, Sandra. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thanks, John, I'm so glad you are still enjoying this story. Not much left before the big, whodunnit, is answered. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm definitely not a beer connoisseur or wine either for that matter, but ginger beer sounds like something a rookie should try. LOL. But I'll take a good ole Kentucky bourbon instead. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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I'm definitely not a beer connoisseur or wine either for that matter, but ginger beer sounds like something a rookie should try. LOL. But I'll take a good ole Kentucky bourbon instead. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Have you never tried ginger beer? It's non alcoholic, and really nice. You'd enjoy it! But, I guess Kentucky bourbon gives you a bit more of a kick!! Lol. Thanks so much, Ric. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
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I haven't tried ginger beer, but I plan to. I don't really drink bourbon any more either. But I've had my share. :-)
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You will love it. Make sure it's the real thing, it makes a difference! xxx
Comment from lyenochka
I loved that you used "Yonks" and "Crikey" - that makes it so fun and reminds us that Margot and Bessie are from another time. I do think the conversation between Miles and Margot/Meg will be very difficult.
Great job with this and hope you get your laptop fixed soon!
Wondered if this sentence should have ended with a question mark:
how could you be so damned cruel.'
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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I loved that you used "Yonks" and "Crikey" - that makes it so fun and reminds us that Margot and Bessie are from another time. I do think the conversation between Miles and Margot/Meg will be very difficult.
Great job with this and hope you get your laptop fixed soon!
Wondered if this sentence should have ended with a question mark:
how could you be so damned cruel.'
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much, Helen, for this lovely review. I'm glad you like the modern day language Bessie and Margot use. I use it a lot!! And sending you an extra hug for the question mark!! Yes, it should have one there. Thanks, dear friend. Lots of love, Sandra xxxx
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You moved your plot along well in this chapter with the judicious use of realistic dialogue, and brought out clearly the dilemma Margot felt sharing her life with Meg. You gave us much metaphysical food for thought. Thanks a lot Kate xx
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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You moved your plot along well in this chapter with the judicious use of realistic dialogue, and brought out clearly the dilemma Margot felt sharing her life with Meg. You gave us much metaphysical food for thought. Thanks a lot Kate xx
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, Kate, it's getting closer to finding the one who tries to murder Meg. Thanks so much for the lovely review, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Sandra, the plot is thickening, as the saying goes, and you've left us on a cliff hanger. As usual as I might say, Lol... Now, I can't wait to see what is to happen next. The build up is killing me. I just wonder, are there going to be more surprises?
I was so glad to see your post. A big hug, Ulla xxxx
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Oh, Sandra, the plot is thickening, as the saying goes, and you've left us on a cliff hanger. As usual as I might say, Lol... Now, I can't wait to see what is to happen next. The build up is killing me. I just wonder, are there going to be more surprises?
I was so glad to see your post. A big hug, Ulla xxxx
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Surprises? Hmm, now that would be telling, wouldn't it, and we must show not tell!! Lol. Thank you so much for this lovely review, dear friend, and the golden star. Love and hugs, Sandra xxxxx
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Hehe, so true, hugs back to you. Xxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
We are getting very close to discovering the murderer and I must say I cannot even imagine which one did not do it. What a bunch of evil connivers! Miles has discovered what become of the money and I suppose he is about to tell Meg all about it. Good news and bad news. How will it go? Nancy:)
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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We are getting very close to discovering the murderer and I must say I cannot even imagine which one did not do it. What a bunch of evil connivers! Miles has discovered what become of the money and I suppose he is about to tell Meg all about it. Good news and bad news. How will it go? Nancy:)
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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I think the next part will be hard on both Miles and Margot. (and me!) Thank you so much, Nancy, for another lovely review and an extra hug for the golden star!! I'm glad you are still enjoying my story, it won't be long before the person who wants to murder Meg is known. Still not sure it that person succeeds!! Lol. Love you, dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from country ranch writer
Hum I guess we learn something new every day maybe we while find out how she knew that word. We wonder what will happen next.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Hum I guess we learn something new every day maybe we while find out how she knew that word. We wonder what will happen next.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2022
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Yes, it's amazing what I've learned researching for this novel. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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