Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment.

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

I wouldn't know one form of poetry from another, but darkness and souls paints a vivid picture for me and for most, that puts a mind to spinning. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022

Thanks. I am glad you felt the spin!

Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

Very spooky write, dear poet.
My home is haunted by
mischievous spirits. We also
have angels too, their singing
is lovely. Best wishes for the
contest. Blessings ~

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 Comment Written 21-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022

I grew up in a house that had its presences. If is an interesting way to live, isn't it?

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like how make the darkness tangible with "brushes past my soul." It uses two different senses of sight and feeling as you personify the darkness. Great job for your club entry for the senryu challenge!

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 Comment Written 21-Jul-2022

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2022

Thank you for your kind words. I am glad it was able to get the feeling across.