How to be famous
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Comment from Pantygynt
And I thought it was going to be a streaker. Well it was in a way I suppose. I don't imagine it had any clothes on. Had the police been involved in the chase we would had pigs chase pigs headlines.
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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And I thought it was going to be a streaker. Well it was in a way I suppose. I don't imagine it had any clothes on. Had the police been involved in the chase we would had pigs chase pigs headlines.
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Lol. What a super review. Made me laugh out loud. Thanks so much.
Wendy
Comment from Sally Law
This is hysterical. I especially like the surprise ending and the pig running to save his bacon. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal xoxo's
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This is hysterical. I especially like the surprise ending and the pig running to save his bacon. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal xoxo's
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thank you so much Sal. I appreciate your review and good wishes. Glad you enjoyed it!
Wendy
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a great dribble flash fiction. You've performed wonders in fifty words, beginning with, "He trotted," and hamming it up." You mentioned his "strong build," while "hogging the limelight." The suspense continued to build until the final twist. This sounds like a winner. Best wishes in the contest.
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reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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This is a great dribble flash fiction. You've performed wonders in fifty words, beginning with, "He trotted," and hamming it up." You mentioned his "strong build," while "hogging the limelight." The suspense continued to build until the final twist. This sounds like a winner. Best wishes in the contest.
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Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thank you so much. I?m so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you too for the good wishes, also appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from LisaMay
Some spectators might think it was snort very funny for the game to be interrupted.
I love your story, cleverly incorporating piggy puns.
Did you hear about the piglets who wanted to do something special for Mother's Day? They threw a sowprize party.
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Some spectators might think it was snort very funny for the game to be interrupted.
I love your story, cleverly incorporating piggy puns.
Did you hear about the piglets who wanted to do something special for Mother's Day? They threw a sowprize party.
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Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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I knew you would like it! I felt sorry for the poor pig who was quite a long way from his home (No, I'm not a vegetarian, but I wish I was, when I think about the origins of my food!) Thanks so much for your review. Love your riddle too!
Wendy
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You might enjoy this squirrel's bid for freedom:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MZ8ZFl39YkY