The Big Fish
Fisherman Catches a Big Fish39 total reviews
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer I hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your 100 word dash with us. To tell a story in so few words is a challenge that I think you executed well. I think it was funny, I would believe you.
Not! Good job and good luck!
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Hello fellow writer I hope this review finds you well. Thank you for sharing your 100 word dash with us. To tell a story in so few words is a challenge that I think you executed well. I think it was funny, I would believe you.
Not! Good job and good luck!
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Of course everyone will believe him! Lol, the picture is fabulous, and does prove John caught it... doesn't it? I think he might have a bit of a leg-pull for a few years, lol. This is a great contest entry, I love it, and wish you the best of luck! :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Of course everyone will believe him! Lol, the picture is fabulous, and does prove John caught it... doesn't it? I think he might have a bit of a leg-pull for a few years, lol. This is a great contest entry, I love it, and wish you the best of luck! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Paul McFarland
A good job of putting the humor into the last couple of sentences. This was very well done in one hundred words. I've had some big fish experiences myself. I put one of them into a poem.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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A good job of putting the humor into the last couple of sentences. This was very well done in one hundred words. I've had some big fish experiences myself. I put one of them into a poem.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
John must have been one of those incredibly rare individuals who doesn't carry a cell phone...
This was funny. I'd have just done the drawing and not bothered with th fishing.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Hi there,
John must have been one of those incredibly rare individuals who doesn't carry a cell phone...
This was funny. I'd have just done the drawing and not bothered with th fishing.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Wendy G
I do remember a somewhat similar, but much longer account of such an event! Lol. You have whittled it down to bare essentials and added a clever drawing! Top marks for creativity and ingenuity.
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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I do remember a somewhat similar, but much longer account of such an event! Lol. You have whittled it down to bare essentials and added a clever drawing! Top marks for creativity and ingenuity.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I love this flash story!
You told a complete story using very few words, not an easy feat. Well done!
Is this fiction or did this happen to you or someone you know? Either way it was whimsical and enjoyable to read.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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I love this flash story!
You told a complete story using very few words, not an easy feat. Well done!
Is this fiction or did this happen to you or someone you know? Either way it was whimsical and enjoyable to read.
Comment Written 18-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Tpa
Flash fiction is a difficult task, which you had transpired very well. I enjoyed the ending that I'm sure put many smiles on those that read your story.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Flash fiction is a difficult task, which you had transpired very well. I enjoyed the ending that I'm sure put many smiles on those that read your story.
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank You!
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is an excellent 100-word entry. I love the picture of the big fish. I hope you have it hanging on your fridge. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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This is an excellent 100-word entry. I love the picture of the big fish. I hope you have it hanging on your fridge. I wish you much success with the contest. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank You!
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John, it is on the fridge! Terry.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I like it. Good work.
You have a main character, a setting, and conflict.
I'm not real sure that your ending qualifies as a resolution. lol
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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I like it. Good work.
You have a main character, a setting, and conflict.
I'm not real sure that your ending qualifies as a resolution. lol
Best wishes.
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A funny and hopefully winner for this 100-word dash entry. I enjoyed this creative and clever writing. Thank you for the laugh.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes and regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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A funny and hopefully winner for this 100-word dash entry. I enjoyed this creative and clever writing. Thank you for the laugh.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes and regards,
Mary
Comment Written 17-May-2022
reply by the author on 18-May-2022
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Thank you!
