The Return
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Comment from Judy Lawless
Another excellent chapter, Sandra. The pieces to the puzzle are starting to come together. But we are still a long way for the conclusion, I think, so I'll be staying tuned. Great writing.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Another excellent chapter, Sandra. The pieces to the puzzle are starting to come together. But we are still a long way for the conclusion, I think, so I'll be staying tuned. Great writing.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you, Judy, so very much for another lovely review, your commenst are always so nice. The golden sixth star is a bonus, thank you, my friend! Have a wonderful week. Love Sandra xx
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You're most welcome, Sandra
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This is a very exciting chapter. So suspenseful and captivating. Margot and Bessie's lives have certainly been turned upside down since this story began. I think they are getting closer to the reason why they are on this ghostly journey.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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This is a very exciting chapter. So suspenseful and captivating. Margot and Bessie's lives have certainly been turned upside down since this story began. I think they are getting closer to the reason why they are on this ghostly journey.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you so much for this lovely review and that golden star, Rosemary, that is so nice of you!!! Things are beginning to come together. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Ulla
Aw, Sandra, this is getting better and better. Bessie and Margot are unearthing some very interesting papers, which incriminates Lord Brandon and the lawyer both alike. I can't wait to see how they are going to put it to good use.
I love the story, and it's also so very well written. A big Hug, Ulla xxxx
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Aw, Sandra, this is getting better and better. Bessie and Margot are unearthing some very interesting papers, which incriminates Lord Brandon and the lawyer both alike. I can't wait to see how they are going to put it to good use.
I love the story, and it's also so very well written. A big Hug, Ulla xxxx
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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I'm so pleased you think so, Ulla. You've made my day. I'm delighted you are still enjoying the story, and a big thank you for the golden star! I just had to read and reply to you before I went to bed. I am so very tired. Thanks again, my friend. Love and hugs Sandra xx
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Bless you 🥰🥰
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Bessie is a really good detective. She comes up with good ideas one after another. She is smart enough to ponce a bunch of keys that looked like house keys. They will let her in anywhere she needs to go. LOL Good job. Margot has guilt feelings and I can understand why. She is playing with fire when it comes to her own emotions. Well done, Sandra. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Bessie is a really good detective. She comes up with good ideas one after another. She is smart enough to ponce a bunch of keys that looked like house keys. They will let her in anywhere she needs to go. LOL Good job. Margot has guilt feelings and I can understand why. She is playing with fire when it comes to her own emotions. Well done, Sandra. Nancy:)
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Nancy, for coming along and reading this chapter. Yes, Margot realises she is going to be left hurt and very sad when this is all over. But she can't stay. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying my story, my dear friend. Love and humungous hugs, Sandra xxxx
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Hey, Sandra, I'm traveling on the Oregon coast, so it's difficult to do a thorough review, but I wanted to award a six to one of my favorite writers on FS. This six is for all your great work.
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Hey, Sandra, I'm traveling on the Oregon coast, so it's difficult to do a thorough review, but I wanted to award a six to one of my favorite writers on FS. This six is for all your great work.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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What a lovely compliment, thank you so very much, Theodore, I really appreciat them both. And an extra hug for the sixth star! Have a safe and lovely trip, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This story gets better and better. I guess I feel sorry for Margot. She's fallen in love with Miles, but lives in a different era. Not good.
'I's thinking you's either had a bad night, or a good one,' her grin widened. (period after 'one' and capital 'h' on 'Her')
Margot realised that she'd been asking herself lots of questions (you can omit 'that')
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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This story gets better and better. I guess I feel sorry for Margot. She's fallen in love with Miles, but lives in a different era. Not good.
'I's thinking you's either had a bad night, or a good one,' her grin widened. (period after 'one' and capital 'h' on 'Her')
Margot realised that she'd been asking herself lots of questions (you can omit 'that')
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you so very must for another lovely review, Barbara, and the gold star, I really appreciated them both. A humongous hug for picking up those nits, I've corrected them both. That was so nice of you to let me know. :)) Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Chilling scheme. I trust that Meg and Bessie's ingenuity will trump the diabolical plot and that Meg's morning-after musings will be purged of the guilt factor. Well done! How many to go?
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Chilling scheme. I trust that Meg and Bessie's ingenuity will trump the diabolical plot and that Meg's morning-after musings will be purged of the guilt factor. Well done! How many to go?
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you, Liz, I'm glad I remembered to let you in this time!! A few more, but it's not going to be as long as others, more of a novela than a novel. You can only keep something going so long without it turning into something incredibly boring. Thanks for the lovely review, my friend. Now I have to come up with what colour I think your hair is now!! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Ric Myworld
Now, we just have to hope the butler isn't on the take and give the letter as he is supposed to. LOL. Devious minds are always working and out of control. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Now, we just have to hope the butler isn't on the take and give the letter as he is supposed to. LOL. Devious minds are always working and out of control. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Ric, for another lovely review. Devious minds are needed sometimes! Lol. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Shirley McLain
This chapter is sure tension filled and fast moving. I am ready to read more right now!!!! I'm not impatient or anything. You did a great job as always. Enjoy your Sunday. Shirley
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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This chapter is sure tension filled and fast moving. I am ready to read more right now!!!! I'm not impatient or anything. You did a great job as always. Enjoy your Sunday. Shirley
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you so much for another lovely review, and all the stars, Shirley, I'm so pleased you are still enjoying my story. Warm hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-An excellent chapter, Sandra, that amps up the mystery and suspense.
-Good use of descriptive detail in the beginning to show how things were done back then. The idea of cold water in the morning gives me chills!
-I can only imagine Margot's conflicted feelings, and it is an interesting conundrum when she goes to her own time.
-Bessie and Margot make a good team and are also organized.
-They plan out how to get proof in order to implicate Crankston and Lord Brandon in the scheme to ruin Miles.
-A good ending leaving us wondering about this slip of paper that just happened to fall out of the book!!
-Well done, my friend. The plot thickens!!
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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-An excellent chapter, Sandra, that amps up the mystery and suspense.
-Good use of descriptive detail in the beginning to show how things were done back then. The idea of cold water in the morning gives me chills!
-I can only imagine Margot's conflicted feelings, and it is an interesting conundrum when she goes to her own time.
-Bessie and Margot make a good team and are also organized.
-They plan out how to get proof in order to implicate Crankston and Lord Brandon in the scheme to ruin Miles.
-A good ending leaving us wondering about this slip of paper that just happened to fall out of the book!!
-Well done, my friend. The plot thickens!!
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Pam, for all your lovely, detailed comments. Cold water showers when you get out of bed are supposed to be really good for you. I'll take their word for it, and carry on with hot ones!! The note Bessie has found will shock Margot, but that's for the next part! Thank you for the golden star, my friend, you're really kind. Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Sandra. I know that cold showers are supposed to be good, but I get up early and our water takes forever to heat up, and it is cold!!! I don't get in until it's at least lukewarm. I will look forward to the note:):) Poor Margot, getting shocked again!!!
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She's more upset for what it will do to Meg, it's an eye-opener! xx
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An "eye-opener doesn't sound all good, but I bet Bessie and Margot will have to add it to their 'to do' list. I have faith that Bessie will come through!!!