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A Personality

12 word one sentence non-fiction: contest: personality

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Comment from Chris Davis
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Met all of the requirements for the contest. Illustration supported the word structure. Well written and thought provoking for the reader. Thank you for sharing the work.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2022

Comment from Anne Johnston
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Great job on following all the rules in this contest, and writing a one liner that uses all the required words. Very well done. I hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2022

Comment from John Ciarmello
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Great job! I think it is difficult enough to write a 12-word story, let alone it being nonfiction. You rose to the challenge here. I wish you much success with the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2022

Comment from Carlos' girl
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This was first of all a totally sane poem in response to an insane contest. There were so many rules it was absurd. How the hell you did it is beyond me.
Good job and I like what you did

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2022

Comment from F. William Lester
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For twelve words, only six of which you get to choose, you rock. It would be interesting to see how many variations of thought come out of this. One small comment, instead of "...wisdom or personality...", I would say "...wisdom and personality...". It seems to me the first three would reveal all the rest. Nice work. Good luck in the contest. Be well.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2022

Comment from royowen
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It seems like you have fulfilled the purpose of this competition's requirements, and certainly made a great case for following the contest's rules in this great little post, well done, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2022

Comment from Cristine22
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Clear, concise, and true. I frequently think how much we can learn about a person by experiencing the art they create, whether they write, paint, sculpt, etc. Good job writing a good, thought-provoking sentence under such tight restraints!

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2022

Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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 Comment Written 10-Mar-2022

Comment from Pangalactic
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Great use of the required word prompts. I definitely agree with your stated sentiment. Our words should be carefully, thoughtfully crafted - like yours here :)
Well done

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2022

Comment from Ulla
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Hi there, that was a very restrictive contest with so many words excluded, and half of the allowed words words being mandatory. But you seemed to have managed fine. Good luck.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2022