Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Hands: Mankind's Story"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful job with your free verse, Jim! Enjoyed your spiritual meditation about the healing of the Lord's Hands and the enabling of our own hands to live and to praise the Creator of our hands.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Beautiful job with your free verse, Jim! Enjoyed your spiritual meditation about the healing of the Lord's Hands and the enabling of our own hands to live and to praise the Creator of our hands.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Smiling back ---thank you for the validation.
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
I like this poem. For, I think you lived up to the challenge.
Nevertheless, your creative ability took it to another level.
Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk. For, there
is always something new on deck. Stay Connected
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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I like this poem. For, I think you lived up to the challenge.
Nevertheless, your creative ability took it to another level.
Keep Writing. And don't forget to stop by to talk. For, there
is always something new on deck. Stay Connected
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you very muchm
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your free verse club response. I enjoyed reading it. I like the art you paired with your well thought out poem. In all verses, there is the reality of God as the creator. I like how each 'hands' theme received its own verse.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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You did a great job with your free verse club response. I enjoyed reading it. I like the art you paired with your well thought out poem. In all verses, there is the reality of God as the creator. I like how each 'hands' theme received its own verse.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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I apprecaite your kind validation. Thank you!
Comment from Sophie Strand1
I like this poem. It has a nice flow and a nice story. It gives glory to God, the best thing of all. I think it should be capitalized at the beginning of lines though.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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I like this poem. It has a nice flow and a nice story. It gives glory to God, the best thing of all. I think it should be capitalized at the beginning of lines though.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thanks
Comment from Ben Colder
I understand this as it touches the soul of man. Deep in the heart of reality, life is forever a changing source with step by step into the serenity of Christ. I am 83 and live day by day in Him.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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I understand this as it touches the soul of man. Deep in the heart of reality, life is forever a changing source with step by step into the serenity of Christ. I am 83 and live day by day in Him.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Ben, Wow! thank you, While I have had a grat apprecaition for your own personal submisssions, I have racheted my apprecation up a notch in reflection that you, Sir, are a decade wiser than me :) Jim
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great commentary on hands, well-written and a pleasure to read. Thankfully for those nail-scarred hands of our Saviour and for the hands of our friends and family who have been there for us through the years.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Great commentary on hands, well-written and a pleasure to read. Thankfully for those nail-scarred hands of our Saviour and for the hands of our friends and family who have been there for us through the years.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Thank you
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You are welcome
Comment from royowen
What a great interpretation of this picture this artwork, that is a marvellous one. You have latched on most beautifully written to the spirit behind the artwork my friend, an excellent post my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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What a great interpretation of this picture this artwork, that is a marvellous one. You have latched on most beautifully written to the spirit behind the artwork my friend, an excellent post my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Appreciate your comments
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very well done. That last paragraph is excellent.
Hands that can turn into fists
And fight for the freedom that was so hard won.
Hands that wipe away the tears
That are shed for the lives lost in that conflict.
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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Very well done. That last paragraph is excellent.
Hands that can turn into fists
And fight for the freedom that was so hard won.
Hands that wipe away the tears
That are shed for the lives lost in that conflict.
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2022
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PAul, I enjoyed your addendum?