The Return
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Comment from Judy Lawless
Another intriguing chapter, Sandra. It's starting to become a little paranormal. I wonder what will happen now? Can two people from two different centuries reunite? Great hook for the next chapter. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Another intriguing chapter, Sandra. It's starting to become a little paranormal. I wonder what will happen now? Can two people from two different centuries reunite? Great hook for the next chapter. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Judy, for reading this chapter, and for the great comments. I do appreciate them. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Sanku
I liked the church scene very much .You have imparted the atmosphere very well. I hope Margot will not come to any harm in this experiment..The story is moving very well.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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I liked the church scene very much .You have imparted the atmosphere very well. I hope Margot will not come to any harm in this experiment..The story is moving very well.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thank you, Sanku. I'm so pleased you are enjoying my story. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from aryr
What a fantastic continuation chapter, Sandra. I am so glad that Bessie is going to be there for Margot's support. The trunks became journey of humor and delights, so many dresses, and all of them to be donated to a local museum. Bessie was able to share the locket with both of their pictures. The day is finally here and Bessie and Margot traveled to the church and after a few moments there, she was ready for Meg's grave. Time would tell as she placed her hand on the headstone. This was great. It was well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings, hugs and smiles.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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What a fantastic continuation chapter, Sandra. I am so glad that Bessie is going to be there for Margot's support. The trunks became journey of humor and delights, so many dresses, and all of them to be donated to a local museum. Bessie was able to share the locket with both of their pictures. The day is finally here and Bessie and Margot traveled to the church and after a few moments there, she was ready for Meg's grave. Time would tell as she placed her hand on the headstone. This was great. It was well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings, hugs and smiles.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much, Alie, for another of your detailed reviews, and wonderful comments. I'm delighted you are still enjoying the story. Love and hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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You are so welcome, Sandra. Love n hugs.
Comment from Jay Squires
I feel you are about to take me with you into an alternate reality that is going to be great fun and filled with mystery, romance, and decisions that need to be made. And I feel quite comfortable with my guide. Bring it on, Dear Sandra!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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I feel you are about to take me with you into an alternate reality that is going to be great fun and filled with mystery, romance, and decisions that need to be made. And I feel quite comfortable with my guide. Bring it on, Dear Sandra!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Yes, there is a lot coming, and I'm just hoping everyone will like where I'm taking them. The wonderful thing about this sort of time travel fiction, you can do anything and no one can say it's impossible because everything is. Thank you my friend, for this lovely review and the golden star, you are such a lovely man. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Cindy Warren
I'm stumped. I can't for the life of me figure out how Margot is supposed to put right something that happened in a past life. They must have both been dead at some point, yet they couldn't be together. I can't wait to see what you have in mind.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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I'm stumped. I can't for the life of me figure out how Margot is supposed to put right something that happened in a past life. They must have both been dead at some point, yet they couldn't be together. I can't wait to see what you have in mind.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Margot can't figure it out, either. It's lucky I can!!! Lol. Thanks so much, Cindy, for another reading this part and the lovely comments. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from RGstar
I remember early the first book, I was in tune with that one and found it a really good piece of work. I went away a while and as you know difficult to just step right in. I wanted to see how this was faring.
Good piece of writing, though the details are far and in between. You deserve success and acknowledgement for this series, and hope it does well for you.
Good chapter.
Best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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I remember early the first book, I was in tune with that one and found it a really good piece of work. I went away a while and as you know difficult to just step right in. I wanted to see how this was faring.
Good piece of writing, though the details are far and in between. You deserve success and acknowledgement for this series, and hope it does well for you.
Good chapter.
Best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Ah, This Time - That Time, it's amazing how well that series is still doing on Amazon. Everyone liked Mildred, lol, it's funny how a character who was played a minor role to start, blossomed into everyones' favourite. They are coming back after this book is finished.
Thanks so much for reading this part, and your lovely comments, I really appreciate that. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from royowen
You've left the story in a good place Sandra, obviously touching the headstone, even though it seems a little mystical, sounds like the appropriate thing to do. But after seeing the pictures of Miles and Meg. Seeing the uncanny resemblance between her and Meg, she's going ahead with helping, well dune, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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You've left the story in a good place Sandra, obviously touching the headstone, even though it seems a little mystical, sounds like the appropriate thing to do. But after seeing the pictures of Miles and Meg. Seeing the uncanny resemblance between her and Meg, she's going ahead with helping, well dune, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for another lovely, well thought out review, Roy. Yes, Margot feels an obligation now to help them. How? She has yet to discover. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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Good job
Comment from Pam (respa)
-An excellent chapter, Sandra.
-Great rapport between Bessie and Margot.
-I like Margot has calmed herself and isn't
resisting Bessie's idea of visiting the grave.
-You do a good job with her expressing her
feelings step by step, still being cautious,
but not afraid.
-Bessie is also doing a good job of ignoring
some of Margot's comments, like the feeling of being creepy"
'I's not knowing if I'll be getting another cup of this.'
-I also like the ending scene with Margot suggesting
they go in the church, and she said a prayer.
-Very well done. Will be looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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-An excellent chapter, Sandra.
-Great rapport between Bessie and Margot.
-I like Margot has calmed herself and isn't
resisting Bessie's idea of visiting the grave.
-You do a good job with her expressing her
feelings step by step, still being cautious,
but not afraid.
-Bessie is also doing a good job of ignoring
some of Margot's comments, like the feeling of being creepy"
'I's not knowing if I'll be getting another cup of this.'
-I also like the ending scene with Margot suggesting
they go in the church, and she said a prayer.
-Very well done. Will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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You always give such lovely reviews, Pam, and this one is no exception. I'm so pleased with the points you picked up on. I've been wondering if I've taken it too slow, but it's not something anyone would go into lightly. You are so encouraging, and I really appreciate it. Next chapter is in the making. Thank you for the glowing golden star! Love and lots of hugs, Sandra xxxx
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Sandra. I am glad you were pleased, and I think the story is progressing well. Like you said, it isn't something to rush into.
Comment from Pantygynt
Another cliffhanger ending using the device of the church to build the suspense. Well done with that.
The first part of this post deals with one of the main problems of fictional time travel; 'what happens to me in here and now?' In meeting problem head on here you are really grasping the nettle firmly even if you don't offer a solution. Full marks for that approach.
I am really getting drawn in to this and my disbelief is well and truly suspended.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Another cliffhanger ending using the device of the church to build the suspense. Well done with that.
The first part of this post deals with one of the main problems of fictional time travel; 'what happens to me in here and now?' In meeting problem head on here you are really grasping the nettle firmly even if you don't offer a solution. Full marks for that approach.
I am really getting drawn in to this and my disbelief is well and truly suspended.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Of course you have to believe, after all, it's all true!! I know about these things. Lol. I had it all worked out at the beginning of my time-travel trilogy, so although this is different, it's the same when it comes to going back in time. The answer for this one will come, but not yet.
Thank you so much for taking some time out to read and review, Jim and the wonderful comments you've made. I'm sure you're up to your eyes in research and fun. All of which I'm waiting to hear about on your return. Thank you, also, for that glowing sixth star, my friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from lyenochka
Well, the plot is definitely building up! I was hoping that Margot would turn into a historical investigative sleuth and figure out the mystery of Meg's death so all the ghosts could have peace. But it seems something supernatural is about to happen...
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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Well, the plot is definitely building up! I was hoping that Margot would turn into a historical investigative sleuth and figure out the mystery of Meg's death so all the ghosts could have peace. But it seems something supernatural is about to happen...
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2022
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That was good thinking, Helen. Hmm. You've given me an idea for another book or ten! Although I've already planned my next book, so after that one....
Thank you, my friend, for another very interesting review, I'm so pleased you're still with me. Warm hug, Sandra xx