The Return
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Comment from tfawcus
You've set up a fascinating storyline here, Sandra, a real historical thriller. I can't wait to see how you merge it with Margot's present life and premonitions. You're a genius at this kind of writing!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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You've set up a fascinating storyline here, Sandra, a real historical thriller. I can't wait to see how you merge it with Margot's present life and premonitions. You're a genius at this kind of writing!
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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'Genius??' I love that!! LOL, but I wish I was. Thank you so much, Tony, for this very complimentary review, I really appreciate it. That part you've mentioned will be coming soon. I can't wait to put it on. But, mustn't rush these things. Thanks so much for that lovely golden star, my friend. You take care and have a lovely week. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from royowen
You've cleverly put a twist in this beautifully written story, and I like it, you and I are both romantics who like the villains to get theirs, and the heroes to had happy endings, you're my kind of author, this is beautifully written, I like this story, great intrigue Sandra, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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You've cleverly put a twist in this beautifully written story, and I like it, you and I are both romantics who like the villains to get theirs, and the heroes to had happy endings, you're my kind of author, this is beautifully written, I like this story, great intrigue Sandra, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Aww, thank you, Roy! What a lovely thing to say. Yes, I do like a nice romantic story. I'm so glad you are enjoying my story. Thanks, my dear friend. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
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Well done
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is another well-written and intriguing chapter, Sandra. Some of Margot's questions have been answered, but many more have arisen. Just who is Bessie, anyway? I'll have to come back to find out more. :)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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This is another well-written and intriguing chapter, Sandra. Some of Margot's questions have been answered, but many more have arisen. Just who is Bessie, anyway? I'll have to come back to find out more. :)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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That's what Margot wants to know. Who is Bessie? Thank you, Judy, for your lovely review. More answers that will lead to a few more questions, coming up. But soon Margot will get the answers she's looking for and.... Thanks again, my friend. I'm really pleased you are enjoying my story. Warm hugs. Sandra :) xx
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You're quite welcome, Sandra.
Comment from Mary Shifman
I love this story! It is so mysterious and romantic. It keeps the reader engaged and excited about getting to the next chapter! I can hardly wait to find out who killed Meg and if she is Margot.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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I love this story! It is so mysterious and romantic. It keeps the reader engaged and excited about getting to the next chapter! I can hardly wait to find out who killed Meg and if she is Margot.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Mary, you are amazing. You have made my week, let alone my day. Thank you again, for another wonderful review and for another of your precious six stars. You have no idea how much this means to me. Thank you. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from damommy
If I were Margot, I'd be dreading the approaching date. Why couldn't her father have waited until after the wedding to kill himself? At least, she would have had her beloved Miles, and Lord Stuffed Shirt couldn't do anything. Hurry with next chapter, please.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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If I were Margot, I'd be dreading the approaching date. Why couldn't her father have waited until after the wedding to kill himself? At least, she would have had her beloved Miles, and Lord Stuffed Shirt couldn't do anything. Hurry with next chapter, please.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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I wouldn't have had a plot then!!! Lol. You are such a sweet sister. I'm working on the next part now. Thank you so much for this lovely review, and for making me laugh. I love the Lord Stuffed Shirt, LOL!!! Sending you much love and hugs for that sixth star, you're the best! Speak to you on Tuesday if you're free?? Love you, Sandra xxxx
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I'll try to be. That's the day my cleaning girl comes, so I can find a quiet nook. Also, I'm having some tile laid in what I call my storage room.
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How about Wednesday? I should be around all day. xx
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Either is good. I'll give you a shout on Tuesday if I can. If not, Wednesday. Yayyy. Can't wait.
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Me too! xxxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This will be a great book, Sandra. I hope I will be able to finish it. I can't even review this morning beyond what I have done. I am into this so will try to stay with it. Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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This will be a great book, Sandra. I hope I will be able to finish it. I can't even review this morning beyond what I have done. I am into this so will try to stay with it. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Aw, Nancy, thank you so much. That is such a compliment, that you'd try and stay with me is amazing. But, please take care. I'm over the moon that you like my story, and thank you, dear friend for the golden sixth star. You've a fabulous friend. Love and hugs. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-You didn't waste any time or words on this one, Sandra.
-After Bessie remaining mysteriously quiet, the dam broke open.
-It is quite a story and involved plot of who did what, when, and why.
-Poor Margot feels like she is the center of it, and Bessie is certainly mysterious, too.
-You tell the story well with just enough information.
-I am wondering if you plan to put a character list in; that would
help, especially with all of these characters. Knowing their last names would help keep them all straight.
-It will be interesting to see Bessie and Margot's role in this plot.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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-You didn't waste any time or words on this one, Sandra.
-After Bessie remaining mysteriously quiet, the dam broke open.
-It is quite a story and involved plot of who did what, when, and why.
-Poor Margot feels like she is the center of it, and Bessie is certainly mysterious, too.
-You tell the story well with just enough information.
-I am wondering if you plan to put a character list in; that would
help, especially with all of these characters. Knowing their last names would help keep them all straight.
-It will be interesting to see Bessie and Margot's role in this plot.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Lol! I know, I was up at 3am this morning, because this chapter was going round and round in my head, keeping me awake. I had to get up and sort it out. I more or less rewrote it! How I'm still awake, I don't know! I have no idea where this story came from, but it's fun finding out where it's going. Lol.
Thank you so much, Pam, for this lovely review, I was laughing by the end of it. I've just written a long explanation in answer to some of your question, but thought it was so good, it might give the plot away, so I'm keeping it in my folder!! LOL, sorry about that!!
You've made my day, my friend, with this review and the sixth star. Hopefully, I can move on now. Thanks again, my friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Sandra. It is nice to know where you're going, or even where you've been! Sorry I missed out on the explanation, but I assume you will write and share it on FS eventually. I think you are avoiding the last names because that would be the giveaway, ha, ha.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You left a fantastic hook her. I am wondering what will happen next. We have all the information. Well, I'm sure there's more, but still. Will history repeat itself or will something prevent it?
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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You left a fantastic hook her. I am wondering what will happen next. We have all the information. Well, I'm sure there's more, but still. Will history repeat itself or will something prevent it?
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Yes, this is the start of what's really going to take place. Margot is in the middle of one big plot that was organised long before she was born. Thank you so much for this lovel review, Barbara, and the fabulous 6th star. I really appreciate both. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from BethShelby
This is getting more mysterious as we go. Margot is feeling a sense of dread at her upcoming birthday. I would leave that place behind in a heartbeat but Margot probably couldn't leave if she wanted too. She is seem to held by the ghost who believes her to be Meg. I love your story.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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This is getting more mysterious as we go. Margot is feeling a sense of dread at her upcoming birthday. I would leave that place behind in a heartbeat but Margot probably couldn't leave if she wanted too. She is seem to held by the ghost who believes her to be Meg. I love your story.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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The mystery will be solved soon, but that only sets off more problems for Margot! Thank you so much, dear Beth, for this fabulous review, and the golden sixth star. I'm delighted you are enjoying this story. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Pantygynt
This is developing into quite a tale. Bessie won't be hurried either, which gives you an excellent excuse for drawing out the suspense. It is very different from anything else I have read here and is most intriguing.
While I am on vacation I am cutting back on my reviewing but have decided to retain an interest in three novels so wi-fi availability given I hope to continue to review this, Ulla's fisherman and Tony's antipodean adventures. If I disappear off the radar in the next month, blame the US wi-fi coverage.
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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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This is developing into quite a tale. Bessie won't be hurried either, which gives you an excellent excuse for drawing out the suspense. It is very different from anything else I have read here and is most intriguing.
While I am on vacation I am cutting back on my reviewing but have decided to retain an interest in three novels so wi-fi availability given I hope to continue to review this, Ulla's fisherman and Tony's antipodean adventures. If I disappear off the radar in the next month, blame the US wi-fi coverage.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Jim. Have a lovely holiday, stay safe and come home raring to finish your book. :)) Sandra xx