Blood on the sand
A swap qatrain.58 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Life may take us to many directions, but God is still there to guide us the way. Like your poem. I am reading a book about Judah; Judah was, according to the Book of Genesis, the fourth of the six sons of Jacob and Leah, the founder of the Israelite Tribe of Judah.
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Life may take us to many directions, but God is still there to guide us the way. Like your poem. I am reading a book about Judah; Judah was, according to the Book of Genesis, the fourth of the six sons of Jacob and Leah, the founder of the Israelite Tribe of Judah.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks Rosemary, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from rjuselius
This is living proof that you can reach Christ with words and actions stemming from these. My dearest Roy, how much you have enlightened me although my faith is not strpng.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs and kisses my friend!
Rebekka x
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This is living proof that you can reach Christ with words and actions stemming from these. My dearest Roy, how much you have enlightened me although my faith is not strpng.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings with hugs and kisses my friend!
Rebekka x
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Thanks dear Rebekka, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sugarray77
You are so good at constructing a meaningful swap quatrain. I love this one Roy and think it is perfect in form, phrase construction, and of course, meaning and intent. Great job!
Melissa
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You are so good at constructing a meaningful swap quatrain. I love this one Roy and think it is perfect in form, phrase construction, and of course, meaning and intent. Great job!
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks Melissa, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Heather Burroughs
Your poem is full of emotion. Love, peace, sacrifice and sorrow. It is beautifully written. I am forever grateful for His sacrifice for my salvation. Many blessings to you.
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Your poem is full of emotion. Love, peace, sacrifice and sorrow. It is beautifully written. I am forever grateful for His sacrifice for my salvation. Many blessings to you.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks Heather, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are most welcome, Roy.
Comment from Teri7
Roy, This is a very well written poem you have penned about the blood of Christ blood leaking on the sand. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. We are almost at the studying Revelation in Bible Study. It is a great chapter to read and understand. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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Roy, This is a very well written poem you have penned about the blood of Christ blood leaking on the sand. You used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery. We are almost at the studying Revelation in Bible Study. It is a great chapter to read and understand. Thank you for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks Teri, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Artasylum
What an incredible image Roy... I design movie posters and forever and this would make a great teaser poster (the poster that introduces the movie before the talent is in place. Now per your usual excellence... said with perfectly plucked words. It makes me sad that people might mock or try to disturb your peace... beautiful write... out of sixes.
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What an incredible image Roy... I design movie posters and forever and this would make a great teaser poster (the poster that introduces the movie before the talent is in place. Now per your usual excellence... said with perfectly plucked words. It makes me sad that people might mock or try to disturb your peace... beautiful write... out of sixes.
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Thanks Di, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from RGstar
Once again your faith shines through, and within the context of the poem, those who mock, only mock themselves, for where the mind is strong and the spirit calming, words which can never penetrate are only words returned.
A nice strong presentation.
Best wishes.
RGstar
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Once again your faith shines through, and within the context of the poem, those who mock, only mock themselves, for where the mind is strong and the spirit calming, words which can never penetrate are only words returned.
A nice strong presentation.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks RG, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from nomi338
Smiles on the faces of many will be erased when Jesus and his army of angels begin the foretold destruction of Satan the Devil's evil system, here upon the earth. Men have tried for years to erase the memory of Jesus the Christ, instead his powerful influence continues to grow. That is the effect of truth. It cannot be stamped out no matter how much it is opposed.
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Smiles on the faces of many will be erased when Jesus and his army of angels begin the foretold destruction of Satan the Devil's evil system, here upon the earth. Men have tried for years to erase the memory of Jesus the Christ, instead his powerful influence continues to grow. That is the effect of truth. It cannot be stamped out no matter how much it is opposed.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks Bro, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Begin Again
Good morning, Roy! I know that I can always expect your poems to touch a nerve or remind me of things I tend to forget, but it's then that I stop and smile. I am blessed. I love every word you share.
Smiles, Carol
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Good morning, Roy! I know that I can always expect your poems to touch a nerve or remind me of things I tend to forget, but it's then that I stop and smile. I am blessed. I love every word you share.
Smiles, Carol
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Thanks Carol, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is much sadness in this poem Roy and the thought of blood on the sand made me feel the reality of what happened to Christ. I am also sad to hear the foes still stalk your peace too Roy, I wish you well, love Dolly x
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There is much sadness in this poem Roy and the thought of blood on the sand made me feel the reality of what happened to Christ. I am also sad to hear the foes still stalk your peace too Roy, I wish you well, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
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Thanks Dolly for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy