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Waiting for the Big Break

It's bound to happen: It's only a matter of when

29 total reviews 
Comment from Wendy G
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Oh Liz, I know you don't go in contests but that would have been a a definite winner in a flash fiction! Well told! I hope it is fiction, lol. A great read, made me smile.
Wendy

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    I'd have dropped it for sure!
Comment from Sanku
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What fantastic title is 'Waiting for a break". Te end was most surprising .The poor man in his unbelievable surprise he drops the vase and there goes his good fortune!
Thanks for this lovely read

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
    Thankssssss! Fortunately, this is fiction--so far!
Comment from T B Botts
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What a great flash fiction story Liz. I've watched Antiques Roadshow before, and it's really amazing what some people come into possession of. I've thought about some of the stuff in my house, do we hang on to it and hope whoever inherits it will value it enough to pass it down, or do we sell it and beat them to the punch. A dilemma for sure.
Blessings
Tom

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    I'd have dropped it for sure!
Comment from Midi O'Rourke
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Good flash! These aren't easy to do. You put together a funny little story and with alliteration at the end. Yay for alliteration! The man desperately needs crazy glue.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    I'd have dropped it for sure!
Comment from Monica Chaddick
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Oh, that would so be my luck. That or it would have been news that I paid too much for it - lol. This is a well written story and easy to follow. It holds your interest even though it is short.
BTW, someone is on the war path again. You know who.

 Comment Written 21-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    I'd have dropped it for sure!
Comment from damommy
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That would be me! I wouldn't be able to enjoy it because I'd drop from a heart attack at the thought of all that money. This is sorta like the old "idiot" jokes. You hate yourself for laughing, but can't help it.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    I'd have dropped it for sure!
Comment from Jay Squires
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Hahaha! I love Antique Roadshow and I can imagine something that dramatic happening. I've also seen the look of devastation on the face of an owner when the appraiser tells him or her that the piece under consideration is worth three dollars and should be dispatched to a yard sale.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    I'd have dropped it for sure!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Very funny. I LOVE it! Oh it can happen. Between me and Harvey, we are all thumbs. (mostly him) I have learned to ignore any crashing sounds I hear. Admittedly, last week I broke a vase but he dropped a dozen eggs in the store and the day before tomato sauce. So your clever story can happen.
Mary

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 Comment Written 20-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    I'd have dropped it for sure! Post your story!
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol! I suppose it could happen. And oh my goodness, every time I see an episode where something is valued in the thousands of dollars, my response is "sell it!" as one never knows how much it would depreciate, not to mention the sudden insurance cost!

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 Comment Written 20-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
    I'd have dropped it for sure!