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Unfortunately, Yours....

Maybelline Green and Her Pets

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Comment from Ric Myworld
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LOL. Now, you and I might end up on some people's bad list: you for writing, and me for getting such a kick out of what you've written. But, like you, I love all animals; well, at least cats and dogs and horses. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
    Oh I just might end up on people?s bad list but that?s OK. I?m glad you enjoyed it. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sal ;))
Comment from Wendy G
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A good story, and a lot of fun to read ... I assume Sir Cat continued to live there, but in second position and never comfortable! Your entry is excellent and I wish you success in the contest!
Wendy

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
    Thank you for the super kind review of my silliness. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs...
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Was Sir Cat ever found??? I enjoyed reading this contest entry. It was fun to read and told the entire story, except if Sir Cat was ever found, in only a few words. Thank you for sharing and good luck.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
    Yes, Sir Cat lived. Read again. The pillow was buried, not Sir Cat. He was deemed most unfortunate though with the coming puppies.

    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs
Comment from Mary Shifman
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This is a clever and humorous story. I'm not going to ask what happened to the cat! I think her cousin should have been smart enough to not have given Maybelline a pet for her birthday! I enjoyed this. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and fun comments. Both are so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs..
reply by Mary Shifman on 02-Nov-2021
    You are welcome.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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This is charming--a fine entry for the contest--right up there with the best. As for the punchline--I love it, but it I don't know whether you're allowed to start a sentence with anything other than alternating fortunately/unfortunately.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
    Thank you for the wonderful review, dear Liz. Blessings,
    Sal XOs...
Comment from Terry Broxson
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It is a good contest entry, good luck in the contest. It is very funny and creative. Unfortunately, I am a cat person, Cat Daddy to a total of seven cats over 40 years. I would have liked for the ending to end fortunately for Sir Cat. Unfortunately for me and Sir Cat, the writer gets to decided. Good Job.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
    Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind compliments. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sally :))
reply by Terry Broxson on 02-Nov-2021
    and I voted for you too!
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
    I plan on continuing this story in a longer post. It has been so much fun. So many are concerned for Sir Cat.... I will need to embellish him some more. Thank you, again!
    Sal :))
Comment from BethShelby
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This is a cute children's story. They will probably laugh at the dog's antics. A new dog of any kind usually delights kids. I hope Sir Cat didn't continue to be among the missing. If he was located that was fortunate. If he escaped to another home that didn't have a new pup, that was also fortunate. I would hate to see this story end on an unfortunate note. LOL

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
    Thank you very much for your kind review of my story. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sally XOs
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol! And who can forget your Catzilla stories. It seems this time, Sir Cat was just a gentleman and Dogzilla came to destroy the house. But hopefully, those library books will help! Best wishes in the contest!

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 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
    Thank you very much for your kind review of my story. I am glad you enjoyed it so much. Sending along my very best to you and yours as always, Sally XOs