Autumn's Wardrobe Change
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Comment from royowen
What a fine writer you are Yvonne. This is a classic poem. It has everything from a very smooth flow, to perfectly manicured tetrametric stanzas and abab rhyming, plus a very beautiful use of poetic, descriptive language. Well done, Yvonne, blessings Roy
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What a fine writer you are Yvonne. This is a classic poem. It has everything from a very smooth flow, to perfectly manicured tetrametric stanzas and abab rhyming, plus a very beautiful use of poetic, descriptive language. Well done, Yvonne, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Thank you. That's quite a compliment, and I appreciate it very much.
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Good job
Comment from zanya
Yes this beautiful poem really does capture the seasonal activity going on right now as Winter beckons 'Winter's siege'- the language here is exquisite - a treat for any wordsmith !
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Yes this beautiful poem really does capture the seasonal activity going on right now as Winter beckons 'Winter's siege'- the language here is exquisite - a treat for any wordsmith !
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Thank you for the lovely compliment.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a very pleasant autumnal piece of alternately rhyming iambic tetrameter. It may be a pronunciation thing but for me the metre was causing an unnatural stress on the final syllable of foliage where I would stress only the first syllable. I might have been tempted to treat foliage as a two syllable word fol-yage and substitute 'tumbles' for falls:
'When foliage tumbles to the ground.'
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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This is a very pleasant autumnal piece of alternately rhyming iambic tetrameter. It may be a pronunciation thing but for me the metre was causing an unnatural stress on the final syllable of foliage where I would stress only the first syllable. I might have been tempted to treat foliage as a two syllable word fol-yage and substitute 'tumbles' for falls:
'When foliage tumbles to the ground.'
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Good idea. I'll take a look. Thanks, Jim.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery,
meter, and rhyme.
-You paint a vivid word
picture of the autumn frost:
"His palette colors, bright and grand."
-A very good concluding verse with
the comparison the knights in armor.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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-Nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery,
meter, and rhyme.
-You paint a vivid word
picture of the autumn frost:
"His palette colors, bright and grand."
-A very good concluding verse with
the comparison the knights in armor.
-Well done.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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I'm glad you liked that part. Thanks, Pam.
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You are very welcome, Yvonne.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Yvonne, and it certainly is the right time. Having said that, we are still in the eighties so it's a bit hard to believe it's officially autumn. But autumn it is. I loved your poem and the imagery you created. Ulla:)))
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Hi Yvonne, and it certainly is the right time. Having said that, we are still in the eighties so it's a bit hard to believe it's officially autumn. But autumn it is. I loved your poem and the imagery you created. Ulla:)))
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Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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Thank you. It's finally looking and feeling like autumn here. I'm so happy! 8-)
Comment from Sally Law
Just in time for the change of seasons. When we lived in Upstate New York, the red and golds were clearly visible by mid-September. I miss it so. This is a treat for me. Thank you! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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Just in time for the change of seasons. When we lived in Upstate New York, the red and golds were clearly visible by mid-September. I miss it so. This is a treat for me. Thank you! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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Comment Written 03-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2021
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I suppose you don't get a lot of color change where you live. I would miss that, too. Thank you for a lovely review.