Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A poignant loop poem for the contest as we rely very much on our senses to make sense of the world about us, an inventive write, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

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Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made excellent use of your eight words in this expressive, thought-provoking piece about what's important and how thoughts acted uopn create results.

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Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

Using only eight words in a poem can be challenging to have an impact and be thought provoking. This play on words is both clever and creative.
Well done.
Regards
Mary

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Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This is very creative and it sounds like a different contest that is familiar with repeating the last word at the beginning of the sentence. Good luck in the contest!

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Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good artwork and
presentation, John.
-You have used your
eight words well with
a good topic.
-You write this like a loop poem,
and the ideas carry over well.
-There is a lot to think about
in between each line.
-I guess you could say it
all makes sense and "senses matter."
-A good, thought provoking entry;
good luck!

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Comment from royowen

Excellent

These short form poems have to contain almost a tome of meaning to them to really be more than words on a page. The swap method you use is a method I use in longer versions, to increase the impact of the words, well done John, good luck, blessings Roy

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Well done

Comment from Poetofheart2013

Excellent

A very good short poem.
You chose right way
to say just what you
whated to say in just
a few words but right
Words. I really enjoyed
reading it. Just.
Keep up the good work!

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Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Very true, You have a real play with words in this eightwords or less poem. I think you did it very well. It's certainly a bit of a challenge. I wish you the best of luck. Ulla:)))

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Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Duel Purpose is a great eight word poem John. I love a good play on words and you accomplished that with flair.

Well done and good luck in The contest

Blessings
Janet

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Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello, John!
A symbiotic connection between sense(s) and matter.
I always am on the hunt for symbiotic connectons in nature - fascinated by them.
Your poem give the reader pause = the sign a creative write!

Thank you for sharing!
diane

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