Dietary Restrictions
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Comment from amahra
I love how you got your point beautifully across using so few words. That's the mark of a great poet. Also, loved your artwork.
rotting meat tartare [great line]
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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I love how you got your point beautifully across using so few words. That's the mark of a great poet. Also, loved your artwork.
rotting meat tartare [great line]
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thanks ever so for the five bloody stars... I will cherish them.
Comment from jenintorre
Yuk yuk yuk. You've written a very good Zombie poem. I really like the artwork that you've chosen. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Yuk yuk yuk. You've written a very good Zombie poem. I really like the artwork that you've chosen. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thanks jenintorre... just a little horrorible humor... thanks.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Well, this is a good way to go on a diet, read your poem!! Lol. If that doesn't stop us eating, then we are a lost cause. That is a brilliant picture of zombies to go with it, they do look a tad hungry! Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Well, this is a good way to go on a diet, read your poem!! Lol. If that doesn't stop us eating, then we are a lost cause. That is a brilliant picture of zombies to go with it, they do look a tad hungry! Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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I must have you over for dinner!
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Hmm, I'm not sure which way you mean that! Lol.
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Zombie... Have you over for dinner... hee.
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LOL!! I guessed that was what you meant! Sorry, I'm off the menu for the next 50 years!!
Comment from Paul McFarland
I think I'll pass on the steak tonight after reading your poem. Nice black and white picture to go along with your colorful Haiku. I wonder if there are any vegetarian zombies. I'll bet there is a poem there.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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I think I'll pass on the steak tonight after reading your poem. Nice black and white picture to go along with your colorful Haiku. I wonder if there are any vegetarian zombies. I'll bet there is a poem there.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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You know there are... my best ghoul friend is vegetarian and thanks for the great idea (not to mention the five bloody stars!)
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You're bloody welcome.
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HEE!
Comment from Mary Shifman
Wow, creepy. This little poem brings up all kinds of unpleasant images. I am not a fan of the zombie craze. I'm not sure why but they have never interested me and I do enjoy paranormal/supernatural movies with just about any sort of baddie, just not zombies. Still, I can recognize a good poem about them when I see one. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Wow, creepy. This little poem brings up all kinds of unpleasant images. I am not a fan of the zombie craze. I'm not sure why but they have never interested me and I do enjoy paranormal/supernatural movies with just about any sort of baddie, just not zombies. Still, I can recognize a good poem about them when I see one. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Little secret... I'm not a Zombie fan either... I just wanted to play around with a horror poem... It was fun... thanks for the five bloody stars.
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You are quite welcome,
Comment from Cogitator
Clever, imaginative, and "rotting meat tartare" is a killer phrase. Sprinkle a few maggots about, why don't ya. I used maggots to catch fish when young. We would go to the village butcher to buy them. He kept rotting meat tartare for that purpose. OH!. so sweet!..Great job!..
John
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Clever, imaginative, and "rotting meat tartare" is a killer phrase. Sprinkle a few maggots about, why don't ya. I used maggots to catch fish when young. We would go to the village butcher to buy them. He kept rotting meat tartare for that purpose. OH!. so sweet!..Great job!..
John
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Wow... thanks so much for your fun review... I was saving the maggots for desert... maggot mousse perhaps. I will have to shop at the village butcher.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness this is a scary write as these rotting creatures are flesh eaters, this one presentation is scary and I reckon it will also win the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Oh my goodness this is a scary write as these rotting creatures are flesh eaters, this one presentation is scary and I reckon it will also win the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thanks for the five bloody stars Dolly
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Ha ha ha x x x
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Oh, gag!! This is great!! I refuse to be steak of any kind for a bunch of ugly suckers. Your artwork is great and yucky...I will never survive Halloween!! Now is the time I will go vegan!! Best of luck in the contest!!
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Oh, gag!! This is great!! I refuse to be steak of any kind for a bunch of ugly suckers. Your artwork is great and yucky...I will never survive Halloween!! Now is the time I will go vegan!! Best of luck in the contest!!
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Go vegan silly girl... Your blood will taste as sweet; nay, maybe sweeter. thanks for the delicious bloody stars.
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LOL - on my way...just picked all the veggies out of my Chinese food and left the meat!!
By the way are there vegan zombies, do ya think?
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My best ghoul friend happens to be one... so, I guess yes!
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LOL!!
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem, in true horror and fright tradition, carries an overdose of sensory repugnance - the smell and the taste are described to the point of inducing queasiness in this reader. Bloody good stuff! Clever and disgusting.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Your poem, in true horror and fright tradition, carries an overdose of sensory repugnance - the smell and the taste are described to the point of inducing queasiness in this reader. Bloody good stuff! Clever and disgusting.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Must have you over for dinner one night. Until then. Thanks for your generous review.
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I could lend you a hand.
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Sounds delicious... I mean thoughtful... yes, please.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
Haute cuisine, served with maggots on the side.
A truly disturbing poem. Perfect for the subject. It flows well. The last line is the worst, which makes it the best.
Thanks for sharing. Good read.
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Haute cuisine, served with maggots on the side.
A truly disturbing poem. Perfect for the subject. It flows well. The last line is the worst, which makes it the best.
Thanks for sharing. Good read.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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So nice to hear from a person with such a discerning palate... thanks for the review.
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A table at the Morgue De Rue. Cuisine to die for.