Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Hmm, well I think you can find God in Hope, if you have the belief in your heart. I read somewhere that God is in everything we see, touch, hear and love. That reminds of the idea an artist lives on and within his works. So, God is within us. We just have to see Him.

Good work, Roy.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thanks so much for these lovely comments and a delightful review, blessings Roy

Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

Amen! Roy this is a great six star poem and a great new form also. You used great descriptive words and very nice beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. May God bless you and Elaine! Teri

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thanks so much Teri, for these lovely comments and a delightful review, blessings Roy

Comment from strandregs

Exceptional

I really enjoyed reading this Roy.
I think you did an excellent job making this difficult format seem so casually splendid.
The choice of subject Hole and it's existential eternal questions make it very poignant and live.
:-))Z.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thanks so much for these lovely comments and a delightful review, blessings Roy

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Roy.
This is a good use of mono-rhyme and repetition to get your point across.
The faith is what fills the whole in your heart and gives you hope and happiness. I have heard the there is a God sized whole in everyone's soul.
Keep writnig and keep writing
Joan

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thanks so much Joan, for these lovely comments and a delightful review, blessings Roy

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Your poem there is a Hole written a monomeld format, thank you for you for sharing your poem; There is a Hole.
When I feel so low and there is a is empty space in my soul; I wait for Jesus' knows I need to fill my emptiness,
His love fills my soul with His vove

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thanks so much Gert, for these lovely comments and a delightful review, blessings Roy

Comment from amahra

Excellent

Thank you for introducing me to the Monomeld form. I had never heard of it before. I loved this poem style and thought you did a great job writing and posting it. What a great job.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thanks amahra, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Mabaker12

Exceptional

You and The Man must be on the same wavelength for such images to float around in your heart, Roy. I just thank you for your dedication.
Sincerely Anne

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thanks so much Anne, for these lovely comments and a delightful review, blessings Roy

Comment from scongrove

Exceptional

Once again, this is so motivating and enlightening, my dear friend :) I really enjoy when you create a post that shares your first encounter with God. That is an experience you'll never forget. It's life changing. I know, because I too heard His voice. I am forever changed. It literally saved me.
Thank you for sharing. Truly inspiring.

Always your fan,
Shana :)

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thanks so much dear Shana, you are such a good friend

Comment from Janet Foor

Exceptional

An amazing poem Roy. A new form to me and I enjoyed the form and the message. Thank you for your notes and the inspiration for this masterpiece.

Well done as always,
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thanks again Janet, for these fantastic comments and a excellent review, blessings Roy

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

This is a very good Monomeld which has challenging rhyming schemes and you did a great job. You are filling the hole yourself with this wonderful poem, I think.

I also like the photo of Winter Castle in the southern Germany.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2021

Thanks so much Lisa, for these lovely comments and a delightful review, blessings Roy