Heart Crafted Poems -2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Homestead"Musings of an old man -2021
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Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear JLR, I am so glad that I have a new supply of stars, and I gladly give you one, for the beautiful and nostalgic story that you tell in this free verse poem.
I know not if this is really true, or only fiction, but it's still a wonderful example of free verse poetry.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Dear JLR, I am so glad that I have a new supply of stars, and I gladly give you one, for the beautiful and nostalgic story that you tell in this free verse poem.
I know not if this is really true, or only fiction, but it's still a wonderful example of free verse poetry.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Suzanna, Wow! Thank you! Yes, a biographical interlude from my past.
Comment from Sugarray77
This FreeVerse is just wonderful and I love the nostalgia that you use to draw in the reader and keep their attention. Very well done, Jim. I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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This FreeVerse is just wonderful and I love the nostalgia that you use to draw in the reader and keep their attention. Very well done, Jim. I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hey dear friend! I am so very appreciative ALWAYS for your reviews and comments. I do trust you have a blessed Easter with family.
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
This is a beautifully written free verse telling of a childhood memory that takes one back in time, if just for a moment. This is a very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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This is a beautifully written free verse telling of a childhood memory that takes one back in time, if just for a moment. This is a very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hi there! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on my free verse.
Comment from Anne Johnston
A very nostalgic poem about memories of childhood that have lingered through the years, centred around the old home place. I like the whole poem but these lines stood out to me: "But that lone light ... I keep it on day in and day out.
So, on nights such as this, I do not forget my roots."
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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A very nostalgic poem about memories of childhood that have lingered through the years, centred around the old home place. I like the whole poem but these lines stood out to me: "But that lone light ... I keep it on day in and day out.
So, on nights such as this, I do not forget my roots."
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Anne, the simpler times living a simpler life does
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Yes, you are so right
Comment from Cedar
This is such a "feel good" piece of writing. I too have memories such as the ones you write about from many years ago.
I truly enjoyed reading this. It actually put me in a better mood as I sat here writing this review with my old aching bones letting me know that I'm not a youngster anymore. Thank you for that...
Happy Easter, my friend...Bill
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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This is such a "feel good" piece of writing. I too have memories such as the ones you write about from many years ago.
I truly enjoyed reading this. It actually put me in a better mood as I sat here writing this review with my old aching bones letting me know that I'm not a youngster anymore. Thank you for that...
Happy Easter, my friend...Bill
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hi Bill! My, oh my! Thank you for this great six-star validation on my free verse.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poem reminiscing of youth and the flickering light you describe is hauntingly and tantalisingly helping you to remember past times and sparking these memories of your roots, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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A poem reminiscing of youth and the flickering light you describe is hauntingly and tantalisingly helping you to remember past times and sparking these memories of your roots, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thanks so much Dolly, Happy Easter week.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
A powerful poem about childhood memories being kept alive as we get older. I too think back to my roots, which are very different from yours. I grew up in Berkeley in the late 60s mid-70's. But my maternal grandparents grew up in the Ozark mountains, which might not be that different from where you were born, so I can kind of relate to your story.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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A powerful poem about childhood memories being kept alive as we get older. I too think back to my roots, which are very different from yours. I grew up in Berkeley in the late 60s mid-70's. But my maternal grandparents grew up in the Ozark mountains, which might not be that different from where you were born, so I can kind of relate to your story.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you Jake, Berkeley in the 60's and 70's wow and yikes. Right in the midst of concrete, ocean bays and tall redwoods.
Comment from palmart
Great Poem! It is seasoned with detailed descriptions that convey your internal feelings that really enrich the text. The final part brings back the importance of "the" light that started the poem and then remains a little hidden among the other descriptions. Nice travel to your poetry!
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Great Poem! It is seasoned with detailed descriptions that convey your internal feelings that really enrich the text. The final part brings back the importance of "the" light that started the poem and then remains a little hidden among the other descriptions. Nice travel to your poetry!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Thank you! Have a great week...
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You´re very welcome, JLR!!
Comment from George 1
"Homestead" by JLR takes the reader on a flashback journey that feels authentic and dream-like as well as happy and melancholy all at the same time. The old house is a symbol you hang your memories on.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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"Homestead" by JLR takes the reader on a flashback journey that feels authentic and dream-like as well as happy and melancholy all at the same time. The old house is a symbol you hang your memories on.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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George! Thank you for the comments.
Comment from Mastery
Outstanding writing here, Jim as always from you.
"The flickering light, as though an old movie reel was
spinning to life memories of days gone by."
Also:
"Alas, my reverie comes full circle as the moon's full face
comes into view and lights the evening with longer shadows"
Brilliant writing, my friend
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Outstanding writing here, Jim as always from you.
"The flickering light, as though an old movie reel was
spinning to life memories of days gone by."
Also:
"Alas, my reverie comes full circle as the moon's full face
comes into view and lights the evening with longer shadows"
Brilliant writing, my friend
Comment Written 28-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2021
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Hi Bob! Spring has sprung down here in the south, I hope you are seeing the beginnings of yellow butter cups.