Forever
A Love poem not using the word love45 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
No wonder he loved it .it is a very touching tribute to the love between us that lasted for almost 3 decades. Very good rhymes and perfect flow. all the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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No wonder he loved it .it is a very touching tribute to the love between us that lasted for almost 3 decades. Very good rhymes and perfect flow. all the best for the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you Sanku for this lovely review and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful and moving poem reflecting real love and true commitment. The imagery is thoughtfully chosen and well expressed. The flow is smooth and metre and rhyme are unforced. Lovely poem.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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A beautiful and moving poem reflecting real love and true commitment. The imagery is thoughtfully chosen and well expressed. The flow is smooth and metre and rhyme are unforced. Lovely poem.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you Wendy for this lovely review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine sonnet and a wonderful tribute to your love with your husband and I bet he shed a tear when he read these heartfelt words, a very touching and well metered write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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A fine sonnet and a wonderful tribute to your love with your husband and I bet he shed a tear when he read these heartfelt words, a very touching and well metered write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you Dolly for this lovely review. Always a joy to hear from you.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Whether you're in the throes of a blossoming romance, or trying to let your spouse know how much they mean to you - the beautiful words capture exactly what you want to say. Love can never be perfect. That is what is perfect about it. It is to be felt by the heart. I enjoyed your well-written poem! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Whether you're in the throes of a blossoming romance, or trying to let your spouse know how much they mean to you - the beautiful words capture exactly what you want to say. Love can never be perfect. That is what is perfect about it. It is to be felt by the heart. I enjoyed your well-written poem! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this lovely review and the good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Forever' is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me this is a six. Good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for you.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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'Forever' is an exceptionally well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me this is a six. Good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for you.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2021
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Thank you dutchess for this lovely review and the special sixth star. I am so pleased that you liked this one.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from strandregs
Nicely done J
I think you included all the Love motifs.
Which makes it a fabulous Love poem.
And you gave me a wicked idea fruits of IM looking forward to whizzing into a smoothy which will be smoothy oozy. :-))Z.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Nicely done J
I think you included all the Love motifs.
Which makes it a fabulous Love poem.
And you gave me a wicked idea fruits of IM looking forward to whizzing into a smoothy which will be smoothy oozy. :-))Z.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you Z for this lovely review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Possummagic
This is a really lovely tribute to the one you love. There is no doubt that you have found in each other a soul mate and a best friend. So many never do. You are blessed.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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This is a really lovely tribute to the one you love. There is no doubt that you have found in each other a soul mate and a best friend. So many never do. You are blessed.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this lovely review.
Blessings
Janet
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You are most welcome. M x
Comment from lyenochka
This is a lovely sonnet and you met the form perfectly with that change of direction in thought in the third stanza. Congratulations on your first 27 years of forever! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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This is a lovely sonnet and you met the form perfectly with that change of direction in thought in the third stanza. Congratulations on your first 27 years of forever! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this lovely review and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from kahpot
A poem from the heart where feelings are known and shown, I like the transition from if yo go to if you stay-to share our lives forever, a beautiful love poem, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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A poem from the heart where feelings are known and shown, I like the transition from if yo go to if you stay-to share our lives forever, a beautiful love poem, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you kapot for this lovely review and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from ESOSTINE
I could imagine the natural flow of innermost feelings as I read through the poem. Love in marriage as you captured it, is a total commitment by both parties to be together "FOREVER". And I found that quite motivational to all lovers. Verse 3, line 3 flowed better when I read it replacing "was" with 'as'. Thanks for sharing your lovely thoughts. Wishing you and your husband a "FOREVER" love!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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I could imagine the natural flow of innermost feelings as I read through the poem. Love in marriage as you captured it, is a total commitment by both parties to be together "FOREVER". And I found that quite motivational to all lovers. Verse 3, line 3 flowed better when I read it replacing "was" with 'as'. Thanks for sharing your lovely thoughts. Wishing you and your husband a "FOREVER" love!
Comment Written 01-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2021
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Thank you for this lovely review and good wishes.
Blessings
Janet