October Sun
Remembering autumn76 total reviews
Comment from karenina
A vibrant lovely write. Autumn has long called to my inner spirit. It is the season I feel most alive. I never thought of as death...more like a grand finale to summer heat and memories and a myriad of hopeful colors swirling and changing and warming my heart. Beautifully penned!--Karenina
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A vibrant lovely write. Autumn has long called to my inner spirit. It is the season I feel most alive. I never thought of as death...more like a grand finale to summer heat and memories and a myriad of hopeful colors swirling and changing and warming my heart. Beautifully penned!--Karenina
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you Karenina for your encouraging review. So pleased that you enjoyed it.
Blessings
Janet
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An autumnal delight!--Karenina
Comment from Laurie Holding
Well, this is just lovely. so few of us do rhyming poetry these days, so I really appreciate your meter and your end rhymes...especially Millky Way with prey. Nice work, and I wish you great luck! As a fellow retiree/writer, we need all the support we can get! Have fun with it.
Nice accompanying artwork on this one, too, by the way.
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Well, this is just lovely. so few of us do rhyming poetry these days, so I really appreciate your meter and your end rhymes...especially Millky Way with prey. Nice work, and I wish you great luck! As a fellow retiree/writer, we need all the support we can get! Have fun with it.
Nice accompanying artwork on this one, too, by the way.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you Laurie for your encouraging review. I love rhyme and meter but you are right, few seem to be doing it these days
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Sally Law
Although it is not October I really enjoyed this beautiful fall poem and presentation. October is a beautiful month for me and many birthdays for my family. It is a time of change that I love very much.
Thank you for this and bless you in your writing and the new year, Sally XOs...
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Although it is not October I really enjoyed this beautiful fall poem and presentation. October is a beautiful month for me and many birthdays for my family. It is a time of change that I love very much.
Thank you for this and bless you in your writing and the new year, Sally XOs...
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you Sally for your encouraging review.
November seems to be our family month but it is not near as pretty as October.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from kmoss
It is nice to remember moments such as this. I like these lines the best: They linger in the autumn sky and give me chills
as twilight comes, the distant highlands seem to shrink.
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It is nice to remember moments such as this. I like these lines the best: They linger in the autumn sky and give me chills
as twilight comes, the distant highlands seem to shrink.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your encouraging review and for sharing your favorite lines.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Leann DS
This is a pretty poem about autumn. I was able to visualize the scene you described with the pink and gray clouds at dusk. I could hear the owl swooping in. I enjoyed the read. Hugs.
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This is a pretty poem about autumn. I was able to visualize the scene you described with the pink and gray clouds at dusk. I could hear the owl swooping in. I enjoyed the read. Hugs.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you Leann for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Hi JMF
A very descriptive and imaginative poem about the sun going down in October.
you have some great rhyming throughout which brings your poem alife, to me at least.
Take care and stay safe, Pete
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Hi JMF
A very descriptive and imaginative poem about the sun going down in October.
you have some great rhyming throughout which brings your poem alife, to me at least.
Take care and stay safe, Pete
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you Pete for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
A beautifully written poem. As the leaves turn into brilliant gems of color, the air cools, and soups simmer once again, it's time to enjoy the lovely October. And you start wishing it will stay on and on. Your poem rhymes well and descriptive. Thanks for sharing!
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A beautifully written poem. As the leaves turn into brilliant gems of color, the air cools, and soups simmer once again, it's time to enjoy the lovely October. And you start wishing it will stay on and on. Your poem rhymes well and descriptive. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Vanna1
I like the milky way line. Good presentation. Good imagery especially the line about swirling leaves. It is nice that you still appreciate some older work. Thanks for sharing.
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I like the milky way line. Good presentation. Good imagery especially the line about swirling leaves. It is nice that you still appreciate some older work. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you Vanna for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Iza Deleanu
October sun brings so much melancholy, but also the tranquility of autumn: "
October's sun has set behind the lofty hills
and left a sea of smoky clouds, both grey and pink.
They linger in the autumn sky and give me chills
as twilight comes, the distant highlands seem to shrink." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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October sun brings so much melancholy, but also the tranquility of autumn: "
October's sun has set behind the lofty hills
and left a sea of smoky clouds, both grey and pink.
They linger in the autumn sky and give me chills
as twilight comes, the distant highlands seem to shrink." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you Iza for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from L. Kalere
You paint a lovely picture of Winter's spell. I especially liked the reference to the owl swooping down..."reverberating echoes on the edge of night."
It gives the poem nice action. Well done.
Linda
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You paint a lovely picture of Winter's spell. I especially liked the reference to the owl swooping down..."reverberating echoes on the edge of night."
It gives the poem nice action. Well done.
Linda
Comment Written 29-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2021
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Thank you Linda for your encouraging review and sharing your favorite lines.
Blessings
Janet