Heart Crafted Poems -2021
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Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear JLR, Your four line poem is a worthy contender in this contest. The only suggestion I would make is to move you're a five syllable lines more to the left and that way your last line will not lap over, and look sort of funny and be lost to the eye on smaller electronic devices.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Dear JLR, Your four line poem is a worthy contender in this contest. The only suggestion I would make is to move you're a five syllable lines more to the left and that way your last line will not lap over, and look sort of funny and be lost to the eye on smaller electronic devices.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2021
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Thanks much dear friend
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
This poem is great encouragement to us writers! Because what you say is true: "One knows not whose eyes
will consume these words."
Thank you for sharing!
Susan
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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This poem is great encouragement to us writers! Because what you say is true: "One knows not whose eyes
will consume these words."
Thank you for sharing!
Susan
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Yes, our words matter! Smiles are infectious. The best type of Infection this world needs.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Nicely written four line poem. Who knows when our words can bring a smile. So true. Beautiful photo to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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This is a Nicely written four line poem. Who knows when our words can bring a smile. So true. Beautiful photo to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you Joanne.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
What a wonderfully powerful truth in so few words. Our written words do affect emotions of others in one way or the other. Hopefully they bring joy and a smile to folks and help them along their way.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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What a wonderfully powerful truth in so few words. Our written words do affect emotions of others in one way or the other. Hopefully they bring joy and a smile to folks and help them along their way.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Rebecca, smiles are infectious!🙏💕
Comment from Boogienights
I always hope that my poetry will resonate with someone, perhaps make them smile. I write because it brings me joy, and if I can lighten someone else's life in the process, so much the better. Thank you for this truthful poem. :)
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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I always hope that my poetry will resonate with someone, perhaps make them smile. I write because it brings me joy, and if I can lighten someone else's life in the process, so much the better. Thank you for this truthful poem. :)
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you, sending my smile back...
Comment from greyson ernst
this is really really good but to make it better make the end of the rhyme just a thought but as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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this is really really good but to make it better make the end of the rhyme just a thought but as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thanks Greyson
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and good topic, Jim.
-The syllable count is good and
I like the formatting of the poem.
-The message is a good one about
a reason to write in case someone
needed one:)
-Effective alliteration and
very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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-Nice artwork and good topic, Jim.
-The syllable count is good and
I like the formatting of the poem.
-The message is a good one about
a reason to write in case someone
needed one:)
-Effective alliteration and
very good concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Smiling back.
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😊😊 back to you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree with your words and you never know who might read and understand your words and take them to heart and nurture them. Words are powerful and can heal and also hurt, I enjoyed yours here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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I so agree with your words and you never know who might read and understand your words and take them to heart and nurture them. Words are powerful and can heal and also hurt, I enjoyed yours here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Smiles are infectious! Thank you...
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, this was marvelous! A reading delight for any poet. I liked the metaphor of smiling souls. Excellent imagery and visuals and I liked your artwork!
Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Oh, this was marvelous! A reading delight for any poet. I liked the metaphor of smiling souls. Excellent imagery and visuals and I liked your artwork!
Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Eternal Muse, I send back the smile you created, 🙏
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Poet desires when his words will bring smile and cheer in readers after reading the poem and his soul would smile; well said, well done; thanks for this four line poem. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Poet desires when his words will bring smile and cheer in readers after reading the poem and his soul would smile; well said, well done; thanks for this four line poem. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2021
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Thank you dear friend.