Heart Crafted Poems -2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Mind Uncoiled"Musings of an old man -2021
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Comment from jenintorre
I know the feeling. This is a very poignant poem which I really enjoyed reading and can sadly relate to a little. Well chosen artwork. All the best. Jen.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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I know the feeling. This is a very poignant poem which I really enjoyed reading and can sadly relate to a little. Well chosen artwork. All the best. Jen.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from equestrik
There is a sweet and peaceful feel to this and as i get older and watch my mom as she approacheds th late 80's I wonder at the wisdom we loose each time we loose a senior to dimentia and eventually death.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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There is a sweet and peaceful feel to this and as i get older and watch my mom as she approacheds th late 80's I wonder at the wisdom we loose each time we loose a senior to dimentia and eventually death.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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I also wonder such things, we unlike the Japanese do not honor our elders as well as they.
Comment from rjuselius
This is a brilliant piece of poetry dear anonymous! A beautiful philosophical sentiment. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Thank you for sharing!
I wish I had six stars left.
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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This is a brilliant piece of poetry dear anonymous! A beautiful philosophical sentiment. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Thank you for sharing!
I wish I had six stars left.
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Thanks friend!
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My pleasure entirely dear friend <3
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is an excellent Cascade poem. The subject really lends itself to this form, since repetition is so much part of dementia. You captured the essence well, in this rendering.
Ralf
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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This is an excellent Cascade poem. The subject really lends itself to this form, since repetition is so much part of dementia. You captured the essence well, in this rendering.
Ralf
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Ralf, I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from royowen
Dementia is such a cruel disease, it robs its victims of their dignity and reminds us that we are merely being swept along by the River of life. This is an excellent cascade poem Jim. Well done it's a great testimony to your adaptable abilities, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Dementia is such a cruel disease, it robs its victims of their dignity and reminds us that we are merely being swept along by the River of life. This is an excellent cascade poem Jim. Well done it's a great testimony to your adaptable abilities, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much good man!
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Welcome
Comment from mermaids
Your words capture the essence of dementia and what an individual may be thinking. I work with dementia patients and can relate to your words. Excellent poetic form that gives these individuals a voice.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Your words capture the essence of dementia and what an individual may be thinking. I work with dementia patients and can relate to your words. Excellent poetic form that gives these individuals a voice.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your words and most importantly thank you for being a dedicated care provider 💛🙏
Comment from Erika Seshadri
A truly lovely poem!
I am new to the site. I enjoy feedback on my work from other writers. Perhaps you can come take a look at me work.
I look forward to reading more of your posts. Happy writing!
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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A truly lovely poem!
I am new to the site. I enjoy feedback on my work from other writers. Perhaps you can come take a look at me work.
I look forward to reading more of your posts. Happy writing!
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from AnnieDawn
Great job on the poem and that is the way dementia works. Repetitive issues that keep them doing and asking over and over. Went through it with my Mom so know the agony. Good for you for keeping up with your writing. You have the gift so keep going. Great job on this.
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reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Great job on the poem and that is the way dementia works. Repetitive issues that keep them doing and asking over and over. Went through it with my Mom so know the agony. Good for you for keeping up with your writing. You have the gift so keep going. Great job on this.
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Comment Written 22-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2021
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Thank you Annie, I appreciate your understanding!