Once Upon a Dream
A perfect illusion.49 total reviews
Comment from MissMerri
Congratulations on creating a most original and unique entry into this difficult contest. The presentation is also quite beautiful. I think you've done a very nice job and I hope you get many votes in the voting booth. Best of luck.
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Congratulations on creating a most original and unique entry into this difficult contest. The presentation is also quite beautiful. I think you've done a very nice job and I hope you get many votes in the voting booth. Best of luck.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
Comment from Ulla
I loved this poem for the contest. I also liked the format a lot. It's rather poignant.The only worry is that your font is extremely small. My eyesight is good, but I believe many will struggle. Good luck. Ulla:)))
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I loved this poem for the contest. I also liked the format a lot. It's rather poignant.The only worry is that your font is extremely small. My eyesight is good, but I believe many will struggle. Good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
Comment from kmoss
This is a good entry for the mono rhyme contest. Strong rhymes. I like your font choices and colors as well. Did you create the picture for it? Good luck in the contest!
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This is a good entry for the mono rhyme contest. Strong rhymes. I like your font choices and colors as well. Did you create the picture for it? Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A perfect illusion.
Once Upon a Dream
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Mono-rhyme writing prompt contest. Heartbreak is as common as white bread in our country. It's part of humanity...I wish it wasn't so. Good luck
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A perfect illusion.
Once Upon a Dream
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Mono-rhyme writing prompt contest. Heartbreak is as common as white bread in our country. It's part of humanity...I wish it wasn't so. Good luck
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This was a pretty and well written poem. I enjoyed the repeating of the title line throughout the poem. You did a really good job on the rhyming of every line. Best of luck to you in all writing endeavors.
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This was a pretty and well written poem. I enjoyed the repeating of the title line throughout the poem. You did a really good job on the rhyming of every line. Best of luck to you in all writing endeavors.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your rhymes--end and internal work well. Your lines flow smoothly with great imagery and formatting too. I like the repeated bold-faced line. Your theme is well-expressed of one with dreams held that died--was any of it real?
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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You did a great job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. Your rhymes--end and internal work well. Your lines flow smoothly with great imagery and formatting too. I like the repeated bold-faced line. Your theme is well-expressed of one with dreams held that died--was any of it real?
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
Comment from Janet Foor
Once Upon a Dream is an interesting illusion is lovely monorhyme. Sad ending as it can only exist in her dreams. Good notes to explain her innocence.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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Once Upon a Dream is an interesting illusion is lovely monorhyme. Sad ending as it can only exist in her dreams. Good notes to explain her innocence.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Awesome! Beautifully written monorhyme rhyme. Once upon a dream. Why did you flee? My heart screams. Now I see you will only exist once upon a dream. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
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Awesome! Beautifully written monorhyme rhyme. Once upon a dream. Why did you flee? My heart screams. Now I see you will only exist once upon a dream. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
Comment from greyson ernst
this is really good and you won my vote and every line rhymes with the next one and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
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this is really good and you won my vote and every line rhymes with the next one and as always keep writing and stay safe
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
Comment from BrooklynnPreston
This is a really interesting and pretty set up for a poem. You did well with the contest-entry rhyme scheme and I can find no grammatical errors. Well done with that. I wish you luck with the contest! God Bless.
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This is a really interesting and pretty set up for a poem. You did well with the contest-entry rhyme scheme and I can find no grammatical errors. Well done with that. I wish you luck with the contest! God Bless.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021