Betrayal
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Sandra, with this chapter. The details presented make readers feel like they are right there in the midst of the kidnapping and aftermath. Though Tania tried to pretend she didn't know Grant, it seems that didn't work. Colin is one conniving thief and kidnapper. Your descriptions of that were intense--frightening. You left readers wondering what will happen next--esp to Tania. But she is a trooper and fight her way out of this predicament. Colin will get his due.
Thanks for sharing and I look forward to the next installment.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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You did a great job, Sandra, with this chapter. The details presented make readers feel like they are right there in the midst of the kidnapping and aftermath. Though Tania tried to pretend she didn't know Grant, it seems that didn't work. Colin is one conniving thief and kidnapper. Your descriptions of that were intense--frightening. You left readers wondering what will happen next--esp to Tania. But she is a trooper and fight her way out of this predicament. Colin will get his due.
Thanks for sharing and I look forward to the next installment.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much, Jan, for your lovely, insightful review. Colin is a nasty man, and Tania knows she's in a spot of trouble. But, you're right, she is a fighter and won't give up easily.
Have a nice Christmas, my friend, as best you can. I hope you have family with you. Warm hugs, and much love. Sandra xx
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, it's too bad that Grant didn't have someone trace the call of Colin's phone. Certainly, GPS is on. Hope they can find out where Colin took Tania soon! Great job with this part! Thanks for teaching me the word "fasto."
Hope you and yours have a lovely Christmas and a much more joyful New Year than this one!!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Oh, it's too bad that Grant didn't have someone trace the call of Colin's phone. Certainly, GPS is on. Hope they can find out where Colin took Tania soon! Great job with this part! Thanks for teaching me the word "fasto."
Hope you and yours have a lovely Christmas and a much more joyful New Year than this one!!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Aw, thank you for this beautiful, sparkly picture, Helen. And a wonderful Christmas to you and all yours, too. Let's hope next year can bring the end to this virus.
Things will heat up from now on! You're very welcome to the new word. :)) Thank you, my friend, for this lovely review, I've really appreciated all your support throughout the year. Warm hugs! Sandra xxx
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💖 Was blessed to get to know you better this year, Sandra!
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Likewise, my friend. :)) xxx
Comment from Ric Myworld
I do believe I would give him the password in a hurry, but once he has them, I guess he wouldn't need Tania anymore. Huh, maybe she's doing the right thing by making him wait as long as she can. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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I do believe I would give him the password in a hurry, but once he has them, I guess he wouldn't need Tania anymore. Huh, maybe she's doing the right thing by making him wait as long as she can. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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That's the point, what happens to her if she does give them to him. At the same time, what will happen if she doesn't? You are such a love, Ric, thank you so very much for those lovely sis stars, and your wonderful review. I love it that you are reading my story. Have a wonderful Christmas, my dear friend, and a much better 2021. Warm hugs, :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I don't trust him to let her go. But maybe he is arrogant enough to think he can get away with it. He does seem a bit unbalanced so maybe he will let her go. I guess I'll have to wait and find out.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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I don't trust him to let her go. But maybe he is arrogant enough to think he can get away with it. He does seem a bit unbalanced so maybe he will let her go. I guess I'll have to wait and find out.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Nor do I. Colin is in just as much trouble as Tania, but in a different way. Thank you so much for this lovely review, Rox, I really appreciate your continued support. Have a wonderful Christmas, and a much nicer 2021. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Jay Squires
A fine chapter, Sandra. Now that all is out on the table, she'd better be leery of what he might do to her if and when she gives him her password.
Just a couple of things to look at:
'I was just talking to Lorna. We were wondering if you'd decided yet,' Grant replied just as nonchalantly. [As nonchalantly as whom?]
Two wooden chairs, and the narrow bed she was laying on, [... the narrow bed she was LYING on.]
I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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A fine chapter, Sandra. Now that all is out on the table, she'd better be leery of what he might do to her if and when she gives him her password.
Just a couple of things to look at:
'I was just talking to Lorna. We were wondering if you'd decided yet,' Grant replied just as nonchalantly. [As nonchalantly as whom?]
Two wooden chairs, and the narrow bed she was laying on, [... the narrow bed she was LYING on.]
I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much, Jay, for this lovely review and the pick-ups. All sorted. I'm so please d you are stll enjoying the story. Have a wonderful Christmas, my friend, and a much better 2021. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
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You, too, Sandra. I feel much better about 2021, don't you?
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Yes, I do. Now the vaccine is being given, it should help many. It's been a terrible year. You stay vigilant and safe. :)) xxx
Comment from aryr
Oh my goodness, Sandra, Tania does have herself in a bit of a pickle. Not only does Colin have her tucked way but he has her laptop and the recorder. He is also not divulging much to Grant either. Well done, Season Greetings, Blessings, hugs and smiles to you and yours.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Oh my goodness, Sandra, Tania does have herself in a bit of a pickle. Not only does Colin have her tucked way but he has her laptop and the recorder. He is also not divulging much to Grant either. Well done, Season Greetings, Blessings, hugs and smiles to you and yours.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much, Alie, for the wonderful review! You have a fabulous Christmas, and a nicer 2021. Much love, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are so welcome Sandra, wishing you and Graham and of course the family a great Christmas, Happy New Years and blessings.
Comment from blondie560
This was a really good chapter Sandra! I can't wait to see what happens next. Once Tania gets her head completely clear, I'm hoping Colin has met his match! Then Grant swoops in and rescues her. Lol I'm writing your story! Merry Christmas my friend! Sally
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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This was a really good chapter Sandra! I can't wait to see what happens next. Once Tania gets her head completely clear, I'm hoping Colin has met his match! Then Grant swoops in and rescues her. Lol I'm writing your story! Merry Christmas my friend! Sally
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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You have some of it right, Tania's head will clear, and she..... Oh dear, I've forgotten!! Lol. Thank you so much for this fabulous review, Sally, I loved it. :)) Have yourself a wonderful Christmas and let's all have a nicer 2021. Next part is up on Sunday. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from damommy
I don't see any way out of giving him the password. When he gives those plans to Grant, that will be a dead giveaway that he stole Tania's since Grant's already seen her work. I wondering how she's going to get away.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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I don't see any way out of giving him the password. When he gives those plans to Grant, that will be a dead giveaway that he stole Tania's since Grant's already seen her work. I wondering how she's going to get away.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Hi Yvonne, my dear sister across the pond. Sorry this is so late, we went away yesterday lunchtime and didn't get back until lunchtime today. It been chaotic here! The virus has mutated and no one is allowed out of the UK anymore. The shops are being told to close, and we can only see one family on Chrstmas day and after that, no one. Such fun!
Thank you so much for your lovely review and the shiny six stars. Tania is in big trouble. Colin can't let her get away, so he's also in trouble. You're right about the plans, Grant will see that straight away.
I wish you as nice a Christmas as it's possible for you to have, dear friend. Will you be with your other son? I hope next year will be a better one, it can't be worse. Much love, dear friend, you'll be in my thoughts. Sandra xxxx
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Thank you, dear SATP. Yes, I will be with my other son. Don't know what day exactly. He works Christmas Eve and Christmas Day. He's a paramedic. Thank you for your sweet thoughts. I hope you have the best Christmas ever! Love to you both.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sandra, what a great continuation to the story. That Colin is a piece of work, but I'm worried what he is capable of. I don't like, I don't like it one single bit. I'm really worried about Tania. Now, bring the next bit on. A big hug, and Merry Christmas. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Hi Sandra, what a great continuation to the story. That Colin is a piece of work, but I'm worried what he is capable of. I don't like, I don't like it one single bit. I'm really worried about Tania. Now, bring the next bit on. A big hug, and Merry Christmas. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for the lovely six stars, Ulla, and your wonderful review. Tania needs help, fast, she's in a lot of trouble now. We wait and see. Have a wonderful Christmas, my friend, and a much better 2021. Warm hugs Sandra xx
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And you have a wonderful Christmas, as well, Sandra. A big hug. Ulla xxxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
She is cornered. Damned if she does it and damned if she doesn't. He is going to discover she has met Blake too. It is just a matter of time. If he lets her go he is in a lot of trouble and he knows it. Tania is in a desperate situation. Does her phone have a GPS feature on it? Well done Sandra. Nancy:)
Merry Christmas to you and your family, Dear.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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She is cornered. Damned if she does it and damned if she doesn't. He is going to discover she has met Blake too. It is just a matter of time. If he lets her go he is in a lot of trouble and he knows it. Tania is in a desperate situation. Does her phone have a GPS feature on it? Well done Sandra. Nancy:)
Merry Christmas to you and your family, Dear.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Aw, Bless your heart, Nancy, thank you so much for those six stars. Your review is fabulous! Yes, Tania is in trouble, but Colin is, too. Lots of action coming soon. Thanks for all your encouragement, my dear friend. Warm hugs, and love, Sandra xxxx
You have a lovely Christmas, too, my friend. I'm so pleased you have your family with you. :)) xxxx