A Vampire's Proposal
Love transcends death47 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
lancellot your poem A Vampire's Proposal
Has excellent rhyming pattern
Even if I don't believe in Vampires
Your way with words were powerful enough to keep me reading to the end
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lancellot your poem A Vampire's Proposal
Has excellent rhyming pattern
Even if I don't believe in Vampires
Your way with words were powerful enough to keep me reading to the end
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
Comment from judiverse
This is wonderful. It reminds me of some of Dean Kuch's poems. The vampire really pours his heart out. He seems to put his love for this woman ahead of his need for blood. He gives her warning when the night comes, the vampires take over. People close their shutters and bolt their doors. But with this woman, he's ready to make her his living queen. (I'd be afraid he'd forget himself, though.) This is excellent, and the rhyme and flow are very graceful. Best of luck in the contest, and I see this making it into the winners circle. judi
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This is wonderful. It reminds me of some of Dean Kuch's poems. The vampire really pours his heart out. He seems to put his love for this woman ahead of his need for blood. He gives her warning when the night comes, the vampires take over. People close their shutters and bolt their doors. But with this woman, he's ready to make her his living queen. (I'd be afraid he'd forget himself, though.) This is excellent, and the rhyme and flow are very graceful. Best of luck in the contest, and I see this making it into the winners circle. judi
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
Comment from bhogg
Well, a pretty appropriate poem for Halloween! Your rhyme scheme made this one easy to read. Couldn't believe the fiend wasn't going to feed. So much for love!
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Well, a pretty appropriate poem for Halloween! Your rhyme scheme made this one easy to read. Couldn't believe the fiend wasn't going to feed. So much for love!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
Comment from royowen
I'm always a little apprehensive, when I see these titles. I've often wondered from where these hail, but wisdom tells me what lurks in men is not good, including me. But this is a notably different post, there's a yearning in the vampire to embrace goodness, which, I think dwells in most people, I think we're in awe of the potential violence that dwells in us, well done, imaginative post, blessings Roy
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I'm always a little apprehensive, when I see these titles. I've often wondered from where these hail, but wisdom tells me what lurks in men is not good, including me. But this is a notably different post, there's a yearning in the vampire to embrace goodness, which, I think dwells in most people, I think we're in awe of the potential violence that dwells in us, well done, imaginative post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
Comment from Susan Larson
Dear Lancelot, While I don't believe in vampires, I am open to the possibility of higher beings, higher dimensions and higher consciousnesses. Your words inspired me to travel through them. Your capitalization of His light intrigued me and made me wonder.....Loved it
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Dear Lancelot, While I don't believe in vampires, I am open to the possibility of higher beings, higher dimensions and higher consciousnesses. Your words inspired me to travel through them. Your capitalization of His light intrigued me and made me wonder.....Loved it
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
Comment from Roberta Liszcz
Beautiful words and images. The cynic in me that doesn't believe in vampires couldn't stop reading your poem. So true, even the darkness needs the light. Loved this. Thank you.
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Beautiful words and images. The cynic in me that doesn't believe in vampires couldn't stop reading your poem. So true, even the darkness needs the light. Loved this. Thank you.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
Comment from Ben B.
Happy Halloween to you too. Clearly written in a vampire's point of view alluring his victim to his alter. Charming how he used a mix of flattery and pity to get what he wants.
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Happy Halloween to you too. Clearly written in a vampire's point of view alluring his victim to his alter. Charming how he used a mix of flattery and pity to get what he wants.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
Comment from Harley Dayman Rayne Quinn
Fan of the Vampire Diaries I see or was that a Random picture.
The poem was hot and spicy. I'm going to give it six stars just because and will be enter that contest as well. Hell of a job
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Fan of the Vampire Diaries I see or was that a Random picture.
The poem was hot and spicy. I'm going to give it six stars just because and will be enter that contest as well. Hell of a job
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written rhyming poem about a live decree from a vampire to his victim he won't kill but keep her by his side forever more to rule over joint nights the undead king and his living bride.
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A very well-written rhyming poem about a live decree from a vampire to his victim he won't kill but keep her by his side forever more to rule over joint nights the undead king and his living bride.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear lancellot, I think this poem deserves six stars but I dare not award them err I be accused of being a disciple of the dark side. But this post is definitely a contest winner.
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Dear lancellot, I think this poem deserves six stars but I dare not award them err I be accused of being a disciple of the dark side. But this post is definitely a contest winner.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020