Betrayal
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Comment from F. William Lester
Sandra, just dropped in to see what's new and saw this. As always, quality work. I already hate Grant. Tania sounds a little too trusting, like most of us were at that age. Good story. Looking forward to more. Hope you are all managing the pandemic. Stay well.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Sandra, just dropped in to see what's new and saw this. As always, quality work. I already hate Grant. Tania sounds a little too trusting, like most of us were at that age. Good story. Looking forward to more. Hope you are all managing the pandemic. Stay well.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, Frank. Tania's trust in her fellow human beings has been somewhat eroded lately. We'll see how she copes with Grant later. I'm so pleased you liked it. Warm hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
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You're welcome, Sandra. Always enjoy your work. Stay safe. Frank
Comment from Daniel Ayles
Excellent use of character development and dialogue. You draw the reader right in and keep up tension. Your pacing is great. I enjoyed reading this chapter and look forward to more.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Excellent use of character development and dialogue. You draw the reader right in and keep up tension. Your pacing is great. I enjoyed reading this chapter and look forward to more.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2020
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Hi Daniel, thank you so much for coming to read this chapter. I'm delighted you enjoyed it. Your comments are so encouraging, and I really appreciate them. Warm hugs, my friend.:)) Sandra xx
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You?re welcome.
Comment from Jay Squires
Super! And there's not even any supernatural about it--at least in this chapter. It's so good to be reading your stuff again, Sandra. I'm here for at least a year, so hopefully we will bump into one another now and again. This story is so different from the other one about the time-travel. But your craftsmanship shine through just the same. Love it.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Super! And there's not even any supernatural about it--at least in this chapter. It's so good to be reading your stuff again, Sandra. I'm here for at least a year, so hopefully we will bump into one another now and again. This story is so different from the other one about the time-travel. But your craftsmanship shine through just the same. Love it.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Jay! How wonderful to see you back here! I've missed you. It was just recently I realised all my books were time-travel. I write a series of 4 books for my 12 year old grandson, and they were all time-travel. Lol. He even went to other planets! I've just finished a new ABC book about animals and there habitats. So, this one is very different. No, there is no time travel in it. But, the next one that I've written loads of notes about, is back in time. I just can't help myself.
So, are you putting a new novel on here? I hope so, I do enjoy your work. You will find a few of our favourite writers have died since you were last here. It's been a really sad time.
Thank you so much for this lovely review, and for awarding it the 6th golden star, that is so kind of you. I'm delighted you enjoyed this part. :))
Welcome back, my friend!! Lots of love, Sandra. xxx
Comment from L. Kalere
Sandra, this just keeps getting better with each chapter. I especially loved this one, as the plot thickens. I'm looking forward to the remaining story. Congratulations
Linda
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Sandra, this just keeps getting better with each chapter. I especially loved this one, as the plot thickens. I'm looking forward to the remaining story. Congratulations
Linda
Comment Written 14-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2020
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Hi Linda, thank you so very much for this lovely review and all those lovely stars! I'm sorry I'm late replying, we've been celebrating a special anniversary, and I've not had a chance to get on. I'l just so pleased you are enjoying my book. Thank you, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yeah.... I'm thinking my vision was just about on track, here. Of course, Grant's gonna have to take his head out of his a** and see reality... Competition at those high levels are tough. Don't know about now, but a woman in a man's world (that's what it used to be, ya know... still is in many respects) is a helluva row to hoe...
Great chapter, my lady -- looking forward to the next!! :) ;)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Yeah.... I'm thinking my vision was just about on track, here. Of course, Grant's gonna have to take his head out of his a** and see reality... Competition at those high levels are tough. Don't know about now, but a woman in a man's world (that's what it used to be, ya know... still is in many respects) is a helluva row to hoe...
Great chapter, my lady -- looking forward to the next!! :) ;)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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I agree, it still is a man's world in many cases. Not that they are any good at what they do, they all need a good FEMALE secretary to do all the work!
Thank you so much, Yvette for another lovely review. You're right about Grant, he'll have to open his eyes soon. ;) Sending a warm hug, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from alexisleech
I was so looking forward to this chapter, and I wasn't disappointed. I loved the comradery between Tania and Monica, and could see the whole scene play out like a movie in my head. I'm assuming Grant's shady half-brother is Tania's ex, but I can't wait to find out for sure!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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I was so looking forward to this chapter, and I wasn't disappointed. I loved the comradery between Tania and Monica, and could see the whole scene play out like a movie in my head. I'm assuming Grant's shady half-brother is Tania's ex, but I can't wait to find out for sure!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 14-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful review, Alexis, and those shiny stars! I'm so very pleased you are enjoying this story. Sending you a humongous hug, my friend. Love Sandra xxx
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Intriguing--from what I gather, this is kind of a double twist--Grant thinks Tania stole Colin's plans when it was the other way around. Skillful narration, fine dialog, well-drawn characters. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Intriguing--from what I gather, this is kind of a double twist--Grant thinks Tania stole Colin's plans when it was the other way around. Skillful narration, fine dialog, well-drawn characters. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, Liz, what a lovely review! I'm so pleased you are enjoying this plot. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Cindy Warren
I'm guessing that Tania's ex-boyfriend has some connection to Grant. What a creep. And Grant must have some clue. He doesn't appear to be stupid.
'I didn't have any evidence to prove they were mine, did I' should have a question mark.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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I'm guessing that Tania's ex-boyfriend has some connection to Grant. What a creep. And Grant must have some clue. He doesn't appear to be stupid.
'I didn't have any evidence to prove they were mine, did I' should have a question mark.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for your lovely review, Cindy. Things are going to get quite heated soon.
That sentence you pointed out, I did have a question mark on it, but one reviewer told me as it was a rhetorical question, not requiring an answer, the question mark should be left out. I'm going to Google it, as I'm no longer sure what it should be. But, thank you for mentioning it. I might have been right in the first place. No, I was wrong, I've just checked it out. This is what I found, I thought I'd show you for your future reference. The English language is quite tricky, isn't it? (Now, was that a question, or was it rhetorical????? Lol) I'm going back to bed now!! LOL. Warm hugs, my dear friend. Sandra xxxx
Rhetorical | Definition of Rhetorical by Merriam-Websterwww.merriam-webster.com ? dictionary ? rhetorical
1a : of, relating to, or concerned with rhetoric. b : employed for rhetorical effect especially : asked merely for effect with no answer expected a rhetorical question.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, it sure looks like Blake's brother got a hold of Tania's plans and took credit for them. Now I can't wait for her to manage to have him strung from a flagpole, or worse. But I'm sure that is a long way from happening. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Well, it sure looks like Blake's brother got a hold of Tania's plans and took credit for them. Now I can't wait for her to manage to have him strung from a flagpole, or worse. But I'm sure that is a long way from happening. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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I like your way of thinking, Ric, Lol. Thank you so much for this lovely review, l'm glad I'm still keeping your interest. I do so like reading your reviews. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, you put a new spin on the old love- hate story, and ungrateful and jerk ex-boyfriend. I hope Grant will catch his half-twit of a brother in a ho t spot. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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Wow, you put a new spin on the old love- hate story, and ungrateful and jerk ex-boyfriend. I hope Grant will catch his half-twit of a brother in a ho t spot. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
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I've had some chuckles over the names you're all calling, either Grant, or his brother!! LOL Thank you so much, Iza, your review has started my day of with another giggle. Warm hugs, my friend. Sandra xx
Sorry for taking so long to reply, it was our anniversary yesterday, so we had a nice day and evening with some of the family. :))
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Happy Anniversary:) and many many marvelous journey together with your loved one:)
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Aw, thank you! xxx