Prayers for Fanstory Family
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Faith and Sorrow"Prose and Poem Prayers for Fanstorians
23 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Beautiful poem about a family/friend on Fan Story. Perhaps this poem brings some kind of grief or sorrow. I hope our prayers will add some comfort to your author friend and her well being.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Beautiful poem about a family/friend on Fan Story. Perhaps this poem brings some kind of grief or sorrow. I hope our prayers will add some comfort to your author friend and her well being.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you Rosemary for your review and your six stars, I am most appreciative, love Dolly x
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem for Yvonne, Faith and Sorrow, is a nice gesture that will certainly comfort her during this surreal time of grief.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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This poem for Yvonne, Faith and Sorrow, is a nice gesture that will certainly comfort her during this surreal time of grief.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you Bill for your review, glad you enjoyed this one, love Dolly x
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your message of condolences for Yvonne is touching and profound. It touches me too. My brother died Monday after a lengthy battle with cancer and amyloidosis, chronic lung condition. Yes, prayer helps!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Your message of condolences for Yvonne is touching and profound. It touches me too. My brother died Monday after a lengthy battle with cancer and amyloidosis, chronic lung condition. Yes, prayer helps!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you Janice for your review, glad you found this one touching, love Dolly x
Comment from robyn corum
Dolly,
This is so lovely. The words demonstrate the depth of your feelings and thoughts at a tragic and difficult time. We can't imagine Yvonne's grief and pain but knowing others care will help in some tiny way, perhaps.
Thanks!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Dolly,
This is so lovely. The words demonstrate the depth of your feelings and thoughts at a tragic and difficult time. We can't imagine Yvonne's grief and pain but knowing others care will help in some tiny way, perhaps.
Thanks!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you Robyn for your review, glad you enjoyed this one, love Dolly x
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
On;y God completely understands pain an sorrow, and only He can fully comfort. So many folks are hurting. They need to turn to the compassionate God.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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On;y God completely understands pain an sorrow, and only He can fully comfort. So many folks are hurting. They need to turn to the compassionate God.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you Rebecca for your review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Dolly.
This is a fine poem in your new style. You speak to the grief and morning process and describe the devastation of losing someone close.
You conclude your narrative with the healing powers of prayer and faith.
Robert
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Hello Dolly.
This is a fine poem in your new style. You speak to the grief and morning process and describe the devastation of losing someone close.
You conclude your narrative with the healing powers of prayer and faith.
Robert
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you Robert for your review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
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You're welcome
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent post in your new poetic style. Yes, there's a prayer chain of the faithful sending up their prayers and petitions are being presented to the Lord, pleading for His favour and will to be healed and have mercy, well done Dolly. , blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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This is an excellent post in your new poetic style. Yes, there's a prayer chain of the faithful sending up their prayers and petitions are being presented to the Lord, pleading for His favour and will to be healed and have mercy, well done Dolly. , blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you Roy for your review, much appreciated, love Dolly x
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Welcome
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a most appropriate use of this form at this time for this person. The closeness of the near rhyme in the 'd' section of the rhyme scheme is really quite intriguing. Also a lovely silhouette of Lichfield Cathedral to accompany it. A beautiful tribute overall.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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This is a most appropriate use of this form at this time for this person. The closeness of the near rhyme in the 'd' section of the rhyme scheme is really quite intriguing. Also a lovely silhouette of Lichfield Cathedral to accompany it. A beautiful tribute overall.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your review, it is difficult to offer words of sympathy to someone you don?t know, but I heard of the tragedy and felt I had to offer something as a tribute, thank you for your kind review and comments, love Dolly x
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an admirable use of your Novenary reel form of poetry. I like the way you bring the actual item into the poem (I am very down-to-earth) in the form of the pain spinning under the skin.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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This is an admirable use of your Novenary reel form of poetry. I like the way you bring the actual item into the poem (I am very down-to-earth) in the form of the pain spinning under the skin.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you Katherine for your review, I appreciate your words here, love Dolly x
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for your lovely novenary reel poem for Yvonne, Dolly! She will be blessed. I love that you focus back on the faith and our prayers for her. It's all we can cling to in these times.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you for your lovely novenary reel poem for Yvonne, Dolly! She will be blessed. I love that you focus back on the faith and our prayers for her. It's all we can cling to in these times.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2020
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Thank you Helen for your wonderful review and your gift here. Your words are really appreciated, love Dolly x