Prayers for Fanstory Family
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "My Precious Son"Prose and Poem Prayers for Fanstorians
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Comment from dragonpoet
This is a heartfelt plea from the Virgin Mary about how much she misses her son and longs to see him again. Her faith knows this will happen. This can be true of all mothers and fathers who lose children.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
I like the stained glass artwork.
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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This is a heartfelt plea from the Virgin Mary about how much she misses her son and longs to see him again. Her faith knows this will happen. This can be true of all mothers and fathers who lose children.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
I like the stained glass artwork.
Joan
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Dp, for taking time to read and review. Both greatly appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan
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Don't mention it, Jan.
Joan
Comment from Sugarray77
This verse is so moving, Jan. I appreciated the thought you put into the background, artwork and presentation. A moving piece that was a joy to read. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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This verse is so moving, Jan. I appreciated the thought you put into the background, artwork and presentation. A moving piece that was a joy to read. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Melissa, for dropping by with a great review.
Much appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
What a beautiful piece!!!!! So true for all the believers, but patience is the solution. In time we will know and be with our creator. Don't know when or where we will be at the time of revelation.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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What a beautiful piece!!!!! So true for all the believers, but patience is the solution. In time we will know and be with our creator. Don't know when or where we will be at the time of revelation.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Becky, for your great review and 6 star rating. Both mean much to me.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful tribute to both Yvonne and her son that passed, Jan. It was inspirational to say the least. My prayers and that of my friends are with her. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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What a wonderful tribute to both Yvonne and her son that passed, Jan. It was inspirational to say the least. My prayers and that of my friends are with her. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, aryr, for your great review. Much appreciated as always. Great to hear from you.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a beautiful poem about your son/or perhaps someone else's son. A child who is born to a parent, in either adoption or childbirth, is loved so much; our eyes show the love that we feel for them.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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What a beautiful poem about your son/or perhaps someone else's son. A child who is born to a parent, in either adoption or childbirth, is loved so much; our eyes show the love that we feel for them.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Rosy, for dropping by with a great review. Much appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Loren .
This is such a sweet and heartfelt and heart-tugging poem. It speaks so well of a mother's love and faith and of a son she knows she will see again. This bond, between the mother and son, is evident as well as her faith that her son shared/shares the same faith and believe. Wonderful post and thank you for sharing. Loren
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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This is such a sweet and heartfelt and heart-tugging poem. It speaks so well of a mother's love and faith and of a son she knows she will see again. This bond, between the mother and son, is evident as well as her faith that her son shared/shares the same faith and believe. Wonderful post and thank you for sharing. Loren
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you for the excellent 6 star rating and your great comments. Much appreciative of both.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Mrs. KT
Such a moving and heartfelt poetic offering dedicated to Yvonne and the loss of her son. I cannot even begin to imagine her pain and agony. But I do know that the love expressed in your well-crafted poem will bring her peace.
Thank you for sharing, Jan
diane
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Such a moving and heartfelt poetic offering dedicated to Yvonne and the loss of her son. I cannot even begin to imagine her pain and agony. But I do know that the love expressed in your well-crafted poem will bring her peace.
Thank you for sharing, Jan
diane
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Mrs. KT, for dropping by to read and review. Both mean much to me.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Mrs. KT
Such a moving and heartfelt poetic offering dedicated to Yvonne and the loss of her son. I cannot even begin to imagine her pain and agony. But I do know that the love expressed in your well-crafted poem will bring her peace.
Thank you for sharing, Jan
diane
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Such a moving and heartfelt poetic offering dedicated to Yvonne and the loss of her son. I cannot even begin to imagine her pain and agony. But I do know that the love expressed in your well-crafted poem will bring her peace.
Thank you for sharing, Jan
diane
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you. This is a duplicate.
Respectfully, Jan
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Hello Jan!
I'm not certain how duplicates happen, but every once in awhile, they slip in!
Take Care!
diane
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Happens to many. (((HUGS)))
Comment from lightink
I am so heartbroken! I definitely keep her in my thoughts.
May she find as much ease as possible!
I appreciate the gentle wording of this poem, which shows a mother's love for a Childs, doesn't minimize the life altering impact of a Child passing - but still offers some strength that roots in faith.
Thank you, Dear, for adding your support!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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I am so heartbroken! I definitely keep her in my thoughts.
May she find as much ease as possible!
I appreciate the gentle wording of this poem, which shows a mother's love for a Childs, doesn't minimize the life altering impact of a Child passing - but still offers some strength that roots in faith.
Thank you, Dear, for adding your support!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, lightink, for your great review and comments.
Much appreciative of both.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Beautifully written. My precious son a gift from god . I look at you and feel so awed. You walk among where angels have trod. In sacred silence angels came. My life will never be the same. Beautiful tribute to loved one lost. Sad but beautiful words. Love the visual.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Beautifully written. My precious son a gift from god . I look at you and feel so awed. You walk among where angels have trod. In sacred silence angels came. My life will never be the same. Beautiful tribute to loved one lost. Sad but beautiful words. Love the visual.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2020
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Thank you, Joanne, for your excelletn comments and 6 star rating. Both much appreciated.
Respectfully, Jan