The Corona saga
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Comment from richie b
Iza,
A unique conversation. Your words may come to
be true. Your content is light and flows well. Nice
writing. Best wishes in contest.
Peace,
Richie b
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Iza,
A unique conversation. Your words may come to
be true. Your content is light and flows well. Nice
writing. Best wishes in contest.
Peace,
Richie b
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much Mr. Richie, is so nice to hear from you.
Comment from royowen
This is an extra good entry in this contest Iza. You've done a good job here my friend, fancy writing about Covid, simply because another year has passed. But then again, another year...another virus, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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This is an extra good entry in this contest Iza. You've done a good job here my friend, fancy writing about Covid, simply because another year has passed. But then again, another year...another virus, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much, Mr. Roy
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Welcome Iza
Comment from Alchera
I did like it all and start laughing, too! The idea is brilliant about Covid- 19 and I am sure that someone will used it as a new brand for wine! The real problem will be about the buyers. Don't you think so? I love: "You just put my entire family of Coronei under a sequel."
Great work !
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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I did like it all and start laughing, too! The idea is brilliant about Covid- 19 and I am sure that someone will used it as a new brand for wine! The real problem will be about the buyers. Don't you think so? I love: "You just put my entire family of Coronei under a sequel."
Great work !
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much Mr. Toni, I always appreciate your feedback.
Comment from lyenochka
You're so funny! I like how you bring a more lighthearted approach this serious pandemic. I'm all for beer or wine after Coronella but not babies. Best wishes in the contest!
One question:
"just to be in tone with your wine analogy."
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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You're so funny! I like how you bring a more lighthearted approach this serious pandemic. I'm all for beer or wine after Coronella but not babies. Best wishes in the contest!
One question:
"just to be in tone with your wine analogy."
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Hi Helen, what's the question? Thanks for your review.
Comment from estory
The wit and humor continue in this post. Corona as a wine...seductive, and sinister. It is a hard thing to ponder, corona 20, and 21. We don't know when this end. Laughter is our only remedy. estory
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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The wit and humor continue in this post. Corona as a wine...seductive, and sinister. It is a hard thing to ponder, corona 20, and 21. We don't know when this end. Laughter is our only remedy. estory
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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You are so right, laughter is our only solution to get out from this craziness.
Comment from humpwhistle
Good one, Iza. I like that you personified the pandemic. It's easier to visualize it as a character. I like the wine reference, too. But I think this particular bottle has turned bad.
Best of luck with the judges.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Good one, Iza. I like that you personified the pandemic. It's easier to visualize it as a character. I like the wine reference, too. But I think this particular bottle has turned bad.
Best of luck with the judges.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Hi Lee, you are right it's a bad wine, but I hate when they add years to certain bad problems, it makes me think that there will be one for each year.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A deadly vintage by the sounds of things here Iza and I think I would close down this distillery immediately if I had my way, a unique and inventive write, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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A deadly vintage by the sounds of things here Iza and I think I would close down this distillery immediately if I had my way, a unique and inventive write, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thanks, Ms. Dolly I would shut it down too:) but all i can do is to make fun of it.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a good virus dialogue. I hope it does well in the contest.
This will improve this sentence:
To tell you the truth I was just testing the waters. I wanted from (no from--I wanted you to deny it) you to deny it, to say that there is no 20 after you....
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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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This is a good virus dialogue. I hope it does well in the contest.
This will improve this sentence:
To tell you the truth I was just testing the waters. I wanted from (no from--I wanted you to deny it) you to deny it, to say that there is no 20 after you....
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Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Hello my friend, thank you so much for your feedback and suggestion.
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Glad to help anytime.