Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a good job with your contest entry. I like the presentation--the color scheme, the image, and your well-thought out message. I believe your second line has 8, not 7, syllables. Perhaps you could delete the word 'and' then put a dash at the end of line 1. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020

Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from prodigal

Excellent

I suppose I agree with the sentiment. Fear is the great mind killer. Doubt as well and doubt is just another version of fear. Authentic selves sequestered is interesting. Voluntarily and unconsciously sequestered, but locked away all the same.

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020

Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from damommy

Excellent

You're so right. I wonder how many people are fearful of getting out these days, especially older people. We must break loose from the fears that hold us back. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020

Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is a very shrewd viewpoint. We are certainly beset by doubt and fear, and a mild attack of agoraphobia, after enduring a couple of months of confined living. Beautifully written entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 10-Jul-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2020

Thanks for your great review, Roy
Hugs, Trisha

reply by royowen on 14-Jul-2020

My pleasure Trish