The Corona saga
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "In search of Heaven"to keep my sanity in time of pandemic
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Comment from estory
This chapter is like a ray of sunshine in all the cloudy days. A break in the weather. You really put us there under the tree, lying on the grass doing those 'grass angels'. And when the rising mood gets clouded by doubts of ever seeing family again, memories of sharing a laugh with your father gives us that connection. And you turn to your faith, the bedrock, to have hope for the future. estory
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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This chapter is like a ray of sunshine in all the cloudy days. A break in the weather. You really put us there under the tree, lying on the grass doing those 'grass angels'. And when the rising mood gets clouded by doubts of ever seeing family again, memories of sharing a laugh with your father gives us that connection. And you turn to your faith, the bedrock, to have hope for the future. estory
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review, you really capture the message of this story:)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
(typos; laying s/b lying; letting the sun (TO--omit) caress my face; semicolon vs comma after "for fools; smart people..." and after "Coronella I'm back; guess"; think clear s/b clearly) Nice kick to Coronella at the end. Cheers. LIZ
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(typos; laying s/b lying; letting the sun (TO--omit) caress my face; semicolon vs comma after "for fools; smart people..." and after "Coronella I'm back; guess"; think clear s/b clearly) Nice kick to Coronella at the end. Cheers. LIZ
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Comment Written 01-Jul-2020