The Potato Wagon
A new purpose for an old friend.30 total reviews
Comment from Susan Larson
For those of us beyond a certain age, that little red wagon brings back such fond memories. I remember pulling younger kids around in ours, and of course our dolls and doll clothes. I wish I still had one around for the grandkids. I think everything today is plastic!
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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For those of us beyond a certain age, that little red wagon brings back such fond memories. I remember pulling younger kids around in ours, and of course our dolls and doll clothes. I wish I still had one around for the grandkids. I think everything today is plastic!
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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Hi Susan,
The only reason this wagon survived was because my parents had it at their house and kept it under a large awning behind their house. I didn?t realize it was there until after they passed away and I was cleaning. I don?t even know at what point it ended up there, but it was a welcome find.
Thank you for your review,
Rhonda
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The Potato Wagon
by davisr (Rhonda)
Hello, Rhonda,
I don't know why, your poem reminds me of a movie called, radio flyer. It was a great movie. I think there's something very melancholic about the little wagon. Maybe because it symbolizes childhood. Well done my friend.
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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The Potato Wagon
by davisr (Rhonda)
Hello, Rhonda,
I don't know why, your poem reminds me of a movie called, radio flyer. It was a great movie. I think there's something very melancholic about the little wagon. Maybe because it symbolizes childhood. Well done my friend.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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Thank you, Gypsy. My husband actually loaded the wagon up with potatoes he was harvesting while I worked on another project. When I saw what he had done, I had to get a picture, and that lead to a poem. You know how that goes...
I appreciate your time to review,
Rhonda
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
There is something so nostalgic about a little red wagon. So many childhood trips took place in them paired with the imagination as described here in your work. It is wonderful to see the wagon repurposed as a potato wagon, such a helpful companion to a gardener as it still represents memories from times gone by.
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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There is something so nostalgic about a little red wagon. So many childhood trips took place in them paired with the imagination as described here in your work. It is wonderful to see the wagon repurposed as a potato wagon, such a helpful companion to a gardener as it still represents memories from times gone by.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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So very true, my friend. I had one when I was little, too. I was so glad this one survived my children and the March of time.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, interesting, clear and creative.
I enjoyed the read of this poem. The words used were descriptive and
encouraged the reader to keep reading. The artwork is great and
compliments this poem well.
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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The author's words are engaging, interesting, clear and creative.
I enjoyed the read of this poem. The words used were descriptive and
encouraged the reader to keep reading. The artwork is great and
compliments this poem well.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 25-May-2020
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Thank you for your thoughtful review and comments. You were specific about your words and thoughts.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have repurposed many of my sons old toys. LOL Thank you for sharing. I am glad you're enjoying your at home time. Many people in our town are doing the same thing. My husband has put out a garden since he retired from the military. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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I have repurposed many of my sons old toys. LOL Thank you for sharing. I am glad you're enjoying your at home time. Many people in our town are doing the same thing. My husband has put out a garden since he retired from the military. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you for your review, Barbara. I am enjoying the alone time, but it is beginning to wear on the nerves. Still, I'm lucky to be able to garden. Now, I have had a garden for years, but I've certainly upped my game with it lately, and never have I had so few weeds.
Take care, and thanks again,
Rhonda
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your potato harvest is amazing, Phonda. I enjoyed your fun poem. I remember red wagons--most boys had one. Your rhyming couplets work well to tell of this new life for yours. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Suggestion or file 13
The boys have all gone, their destinies called,
[When their destiny called to each boy]
Leaving behind their dear childhood toy.
[Left behind their der childhood toy.]
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Your potato harvest is amazing, Phonda. I enjoyed your fun poem. I remember red wagons--most boys had one. Your rhyming couplets work well to tell of this new life for yours. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Suggestion or file 13
The boys have all gone, their destinies called,
[When their destiny called to each boy]
Leaving behind their dear childhood toy.
[Left behind their der childhood toy.]
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you for your wonderful review, Jan. I made the changes you suggested, and it sound so much better. In the original version, I did have boy at the end, so I don't know what I did, lol.
Thanks again,
Rhonda
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Looks great!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is excellent in every respect. It is skillfully and creatively composed and very descriptive--nostalgia at its best, but leading to the joys of present day.
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Your poem is excellent in every respect. It is skillfully and creatively composed and very descriptive--nostalgia at its best, but leading to the joys of present day.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Thank you so much for your time and review, Janice! Both are appreciated.
Rhonda
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another excellent poem, Rhonda--and very imaginative approach telling the backstory of this wagon. What this red wagon must have seen--you know, if it had eyes and a brain--boy, you can't tell I've not had any coffee yet!
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Another excellent poem, Rhonda--and very imaginative approach telling the backstory of this wagon. What this red wagon must have seen--you know, if it had eyes and a brain--boy, you can't tell I've not had any coffee yet!
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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You are so very right, Mike, and with my boys, I'm surprised it still had wheels left on it! Take care, and thanks for reviewing,
Rhonda
Comment from catch22
Hello Poet, this is a lovely ode to a wagon that had a "life" rich in memories and experiences. I did wonder why some of the couplets lost the end rhyming, especially toward the end in the couplets 4 and 5. Was this intentional? Either way, I loved the detailed descriptions of the wagon's adventures.
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Hello Poet, this is a lovely ode to a wagon that had a "life" rich in memories and experiences. I did wonder why some of the couplets lost the end rhyming, especially toward the end in the couplets 4 and 5. Was this intentional? Either way, I loved the detailed descriptions of the wagon's adventures.
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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No, I went for near rhymes on them to keep the creative flow. I had gone to the exact rhymes and then didn't like the message. I'm often picky about it, but not this time. Thanks for noticing and commenting,
Rhonda
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about a potato wagon born from a childhood toy which was left behind when the child moves on. If it can be used for something useful, why not?
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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A very well-written poem about a potato wagon born from a childhood toy which was left behind when the child moves on. If it can be used for something useful, why not?
Comment Written 24-May-2020
reply by the author on 24-May-2020
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Indeed, Sandra. I've found that on a farm, many things are repurposed. Thanks for taking time to review,
Rhonda
