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Poetic Treasures & Dreams

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Comment from Pantygynt
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The shepherd's delight on seeing this has clearly rubbed off on you. I hope your weather lived up to this traditional forecast. It can be a truly magical time of day, definitely worth recording poetically.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
    Dear Pantygynt, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Darlene Franklin
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What a beautiful sunset! I don't know if I've ever seen one quite that red. Captured your heart, of course, perhaps even the blood pumping through its veins. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
    Dear Darlene, Thank you for your review, glad I could share it with you. Dove
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 5-7-5, Red Sky, has the right set up and captures my heart as well, as it sticks in my throat wondering what omen of doom this is. : )

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 Comment Written 19-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
    Dear Bill, Thank you for your being captured by this little poem, thanks for your review. Dove
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
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Thanks for capturing nature's beauty in words. At seven o'clock last night I looked out my window and saw a chipmunk and two cardinals. They were having a discussion as to whom would be the first to try the contents of the new bird feeder. Best wishes.

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 Comment Written 19-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
    Dear Kermit, Thank you for your compliment and review - glad you shared with me what you saw when you looked out your window at the same time! Dove