Poetic Treasures & Dreams
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Comment from Pantygynt
The shepherd's delight on seeing this has clearly rubbed off on you. I hope your weather lived up to this traditional forecast. It can be a truly magical time of day, definitely worth recording poetically.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
The shepherd's delight on seeing this has clearly rubbed off on you. I hope your weather lived up to this traditional forecast. It can be a truly magical time of day, definitely worth recording poetically.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Dear Pantygynt, Thank you for your compliments and review. Dove
Comment from Darlene Franklin
What a beautiful sunset! I don't know if I've ever seen one quite that red. Captured your heart, of course, perhaps even the blood pumping through its veins. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
What a beautiful sunset! I don't know if I've ever seen one quite that red. Captured your heart, of course, perhaps even the blood pumping through its veins. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Dear Darlene, Thank you for your review, glad I could share it with you. Dove
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Red Sky, has the right set up and captures my heart as well, as it sticks in my throat wondering what omen of doom this is. : )
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
This 5-7-5, Red Sky, has the right set up and captures my heart as well, as it sticks in my throat wondering what omen of doom this is. : )
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Dear Bill, Thank you for your being captured by this little poem, thanks for your review. Dove
Comment from Kermit R. Mullins
Thanks for capturing nature's beauty in words. At seven o'clock last night I looked out my window and saw a chipmunk and two cardinals. They were having a discussion as to whom would be the first to try the contents of the new bird feeder. Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
Thanks for capturing nature's beauty in words. At seven o'clock last night I looked out my window and saw a chipmunk and two cardinals. They were having a discussion as to whom would be the first to try the contents of the new bird feeder. Best wishes.
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Comment Written 19-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2020
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Dear Kermit, Thank you for your compliment and review - glad you shared with me what you saw when you looked out your window at the same time! Dove