Haiku (raindrops drench)
Under 17 syllables16 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Thanks for sharing! Nice work. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. Well written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Thanks for sharing! Nice work. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Sorry it has taken me a while to say thank you for your review Raul1. I appreciate it. ~DD
Comment from samandlancelot
Poems of DD,
I like your play on words with the "pour" effort. Excellent haiku about nature, with the turn of the last line giving the nice aha moment. I love it!
Patricia
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Poems of DD,
I like your play on words with the "pour" effort. Excellent haiku about nature, with the turn of the last line giving the nice aha moment. I love it!
Patricia
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you Patricia for your thoughtful review on my haiku. I apologies for the very late response. ~DD
Comment from susand3022
Hello Poemsofdd, I liked this Haiku very much. I love your sense of humor in the last line... a pour effort... very cute, you don't often get rain-cloud humor like that! :)
I only saw one little technical error... You used a capital H in the title and left a space between "haiku" and the (
I have a feeling you're going to do well in the contest! Good luck! :)
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Hello Poemsofdd, I liked this Haiku very much. I love your sense of humor in the last line... a pour effort... very cute, you don't often get rain-cloud humor like that! :)
I only saw one little technical error... You used a capital H in the title and left a space between "haiku" and the (
I have a feeling you're going to do well in the contest! Good luck! :)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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I apologies for taking a very long time to thank you for reviewing my haiku. But - thank you :-). ~DD
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I only just got back today! lol
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Thanks Susan. I had another look at my poem as it was a while ago I wrote it. Because of your message I have revamped it. I like it better now so thanks again for your words. ~DD
Comment from kahpot
Very well written, love the last line (pour) very clever, great words for your chosen artwork, an excellent image given, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Very well written, love the last line (pour) very clever, great words for your chosen artwork, an excellent image given, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Kahpot - thank you so much for your thoughtful review on my haiku. I do apologies for taking a wee while to respond. Such is life. ~DD
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Like your fall setting. We have not had spring here yet. Waiting for the day, next week, when it will be warm so we can put on the shorts and t-shirts. The warmth will probably stop the spread of the virus...hope so anyway!
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Like your fall setting. We have not had spring here yet. Waiting for the day, next week, when it will be warm so we can put on the shorts and t-shirts. The warmth will probably stop the spread of the virus...hope so anyway!
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Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Rosemary, I apologies for taking so long to respond with a - thank you for taking the time to review my haiku. I appreciate it. ~DD
Comment from BeasPeas
This is excellent, DD. I've read several haiku today and couldn't review any of them because they didn't appear to be haiku at all. Great job here. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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This is excellent, DD. I've read several haiku today and couldn't review any of them because they didn't appear to be haiku at all. Great job here. Best of luck in the contest. Marilyn
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Comment Written 17-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Hello Marilyn, I do apologies for taking absolutely ages to say thank you for your thoughtful review of my haiku. Life has been pushing me in different directions but I do hope to post something on FS as soon as I get my act together. Hope you are well :-) ~DDx
