Love Long Distance
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Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Cathy & Bill
This is a well written chapter full of action, suspense and resolution. So Bill and Cathy are now engaged and going to commit to a real family. I wondered when I read this as to the time frame of the wedding especially with Bill returning to Viet Nam. The details are also great for this chapter. I wouldn't be surprised if this one gets nominated for site chapter contest at the end of the month. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep safe! xoxo deborah
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hi Cathy & Bill
This is a well written chapter full of action, suspense and resolution. So Bill and Cathy are now engaged and going to commit to a real family. I wondered when I read this as to the time frame of the wedding especially with Bill returning to Viet Nam. The details are also great for this chapter. I wouldn't be surprised if this one gets nominated for site chapter contest at the end of the month. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep safe! xoxo deborah
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hi Deborah! So great to hear from you! We hope you are doing well. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this. Awesome review! We're both glad you enjoyed this chapter, and you are looking forward to the next one. It's in the works and coming soon. Wishing you all the best. Keep safe, too! God Bless. xoxo
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I hope your last your last chapter will be a happy ending; recently I just watched a movie and it was just the opposite. Love your southern drawl. It has been such a great story.
C
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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I hope your last your last chapter will be a happy ending; recently I just watched a movie and it was just the opposite. Love your southern drawl. It has been such a great story.
C
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hi Rosemary, So glad you are enjoying our story. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Also, for your continued support. It means a great deal to both of us. You must've been heartbroken when you watched the movie with the sad ending. Let's hope this one isn't the same. Stay tuned--Chapter 25 is in the works and coming soon. Stay well and take care. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is another excellent chapter in your novel Bill and Cathy. The presentation is AWESOME. What a great title!
I enjoyed the 'previously' as a quick reminder where this chapter was in relation to the story.
I was worried about what would happen to Grandpa as the last chapter ended on a cliff hanger of not knowing. The way you resolved it was genius. I can see how he would be disoriented after hitting his head on the rock. The dialogue between him, the man who saw him hit his head, and then Grandma was perfect. The conversation sounded natural and flowed nicely. Leave it to Grandma with her sharp tongue to put an end to it for all as only she could.
You did a great job detailing Bill and Cathy's vacation and what would be the last day of it. Their conversation was so sweet and real. The attractions Bill planned for the day sounded great. I'm with Cathy about the snakes. I MIGHT touch the scaly back of the python but not its head. Readers get a sense of fun the two were having--the arcade, the Goofy Golf, the ferris wheel ride, snacking on 'fair-type food,' and the carousel ride. Bill's proposal was dreamy. It was one for the record books. I could imagine him as a knight proposing to his princess on her white horse--like a fairy tale--only this was real. It was so romantic. I can imagine the 'rest' as you alluded to it.
The departure of Cathy to Pigeon Forge and Bill to San Francisco pulled at readers' (my) heartstrings. How difficult that would have been--especially for Cathy. Bill's thoughts on the train, although poignant, were great to read. It lets readers in on his most inner thoughts of family, love, and the unknown he is facing. His thoughts back to the meadow were well-written. There is great imagery and still more of Bill's thoughts of home. I believe all military would think of positive thoughts like these as they are on the way to their mission. His last request to Jesus shows his faith and his love for Cathy and the baby.
I love the idea of the three parts of the novel. I believe there will be more intense, heart-wrenching action to come. Thanks for sharing this AWESOME chapter Bill and Cathy. I anxiously look forward to the next.
I loved reading this and watching the videos at the end. You always choose pertinent, yet entertaining or newsworthy ones to ground your chapter in time and place.
Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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This is another excellent chapter in your novel Bill and Cathy. The presentation is AWESOME. What a great title!
I enjoyed the 'previously' as a quick reminder where this chapter was in relation to the story.
I was worried about what would happen to Grandpa as the last chapter ended on a cliff hanger of not knowing. The way you resolved it was genius. I can see how he would be disoriented after hitting his head on the rock. The dialogue between him, the man who saw him hit his head, and then Grandma was perfect. The conversation sounded natural and flowed nicely. Leave it to Grandma with her sharp tongue to put an end to it for all as only she could.
You did a great job detailing Bill and Cathy's vacation and what would be the last day of it. Their conversation was so sweet and real. The attractions Bill planned for the day sounded great. I'm with Cathy about the snakes. I MIGHT touch the scaly back of the python but not its head. Readers get a sense of fun the two were having--the arcade, the Goofy Golf, the ferris wheel ride, snacking on 'fair-type food,' and the carousel ride. Bill's proposal was dreamy. It was one for the record books. I could imagine him as a knight proposing to his princess on her white horse--like a fairy tale--only this was real. It was so romantic. I can imagine the 'rest' as you alluded to it.
The departure of Cathy to Pigeon Forge and Bill to San Francisco pulled at readers' (my) heartstrings. How difficult that would have been--especially for Cathy. Bill's thoughts on the train, although poignant, were great to read. It lets readers in on his most inner thoughts of family, love, and the unknown he is facing. His thoughts back to the meadow were well-written. There is great imagery and still more of Bill's thoughts of home. I believe all military would think of positive thoughts like these as they are on the way to their mission. His last request to Jesus shows his faith and his love for Cathy and the baby.
I love the idea of the three parts of the novel. I believe there will be more intense, heart-wrenching action to come. Thanks for sharing this AWESOME chapter Bill and Cathy. I anxiously look forward to the next.
I loved reading this and watching the videos at the end. You always choose pertinent, yet entertaining or newsworthy ones to ground your chapter in time and place.
Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hi Jan! Thank you SO MUCH for your AWESOME six star rating and review! Another double "SALUTE" for you! We really appreciate your continued support. Your comments are always very detailed, helpful and encouraging. We're glad you like the videos, too. Chapter 25 is in the works and coming soon. Have a wonderful weekend. Take care and God Bless.
Respectfully with Love and Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Mistydawn
I'm sure glad Grandpa is alright. I'm surprised Grandma didn't let him have it. I'm sure he'll pay for it in other ways, lol. The part about Kathy and Bill was so sweet. I too wish it didn't have to end. I do hope he gets back home safely soon. It's a very well-written, interesting chapter as usual. I look forward to the next book.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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I'm sure glad Grandpa is alright. I'm surprised Grandma didn't let him have it. I'm sure he'll pay for it in other ways, lol. The part about Kathy and Bill was so sweet. I too wish it didn't have to end. I do hope he gets back home safely soon. It's a very well-written, interesting chapter as usual. I look forward to the next book.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hi Mistydawn, HURRAH! Thank you SO MUCH for the AWESOME six star rating and review. We're so glad you are continuing to enjoy our story. A double "SALUTE" for you! Great comments here. We're glad you love Grandpa as much as well do. Grandma loves him, too, but has to keep him in line! Chapter 25 is right around the corner. We are writing it now and will be posting soon. In the meantime, stay tuned for chapters from our other books we're working on. Have a wonderful weekend. Take care and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Glad to catch up. It's been a while. Is the baby born yet or still cookin'? Sly banter you always toss in! Love the snappy dialog between them. The line about patting the python is priceless--though not in the context you intended! Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Glad to catch up. It's been a while. Is the baby born yet or still cookin'? Sly banter you always toss in! Love the snappy dialog between them. The line about patting the python is priceless--though not in the context you intended! Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hi Liz! Glad you were able to catch up. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Your continued support means a lot to both of us. The baby is still cookin' and hasn't even started kickin' yet, but will soon. Stay tuned--Chapter 25 is in the works and coming soon. Stay well and take care. Have a wonderful weekend. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Shirley McLain
I used to live in Panama City. I remember that awful smell from the paper factory across the bay. It was nauseating. Enough of that memory, you did an excellent job, as always. Shirley
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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I used to live in Panama City. I remember that awful smell from the paper factory across the bay. It was nauseating. Enough of that memory, you did an excellent job, as always. Shirley
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hi Shirley,
Maybe we should've mentioned the paper factory smell in the chapter? P.U.! Thanks for sharing that info, and thank you so much for reading and reviewing this chapter. Your continued support means so much to both of us. Glad you enjoyed this. Stay tuned--Chapter 25 is in the works and coming soon. Take care and have a nice weekend. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Bill had better survive the jungles of Vietnam, that's all I can say. It would be absolutely horrible if he did not. I really enjoy reading this story. Thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Bill had better survive the jungles of Vietnam, that's all I can say. It would be absolutely horrible if he did not. I really enjoy reading this story. Thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hi Barbara! Very well said! We all hope Bill survives the jungle. What would Cathy, the baby, and even Grandma and Grandpa do without him? You have to admit--he's one of a kind! :) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this. Also, for your continued support that means so much to us. So glad you are enjoying this story. Chapter 25 is in the works and coming soon. Stay well and take care. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill and Cathy
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is another great chapter to a best seller! I seem to get to the end before I a ready to.
I am uncertain if you need an apostrophe on the last word. "I prayed that our training was better than our adversaries."
The videos are great too.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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This is another great chapter to a best seller! I seem to get to the end before I a ready to.
I am uncertain if you need an apostrophe on the last word. "I prayed that our training was better than our adversaries."
The videos are great too.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hi Rebecca! We hope you are doing well. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this. Your support and great comments mean so much to both of us. Glad you are enjoying the story and the videos, too! We are already starting to format the book for publication. HURRAH! Still a few more chapters to go, and these will be the most intense and uncertain. Chapter 25 is in the works now and coming soon. Take care and God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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A book in the making is wonderful news! Congratulations are sent with love and appreciation for your labors.
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Thank you! Love and appreciation back to you, Rebecca. Again, your support and encouragement mean so much!
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Cathy & Bill,
Lovely piece of Romance Fiction having matching the theme lucid wording, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with some interesting Romantic scenes, Particularly "..."Cathy, will you marry me?"..." + "A big smile crossed...you can guess the rest!" Marvelous!
The end is actually the beginning, and I like your this style very much.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hello Cathy & Bill,
Lovely piece of Romance Fiction having matching the theme lucid wording, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end with some interesting Romantic scenes, Particularly "..."Cathy, will you marry me?"..." + "A big smile crossed...you can guess the rest!" Marvelous!
The end is actually the beginning, and I like your this style very much.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Greetings, our Friend! Love the word "marvelous" here! So glad you enjoyed this chapter and it made you smile. :) Thank you SO MUCH for the AWESOME six star rating and review! Your continued support means a great deal to both of us. A double "SALUTE" for you!! Stay tuned for the next chapter. It is in the works and coming soon. Take care and God Bless. Have a wonderful weekend.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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Bill & Cathy, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Sally Law
I admire that Cathy can ride a Ferris wheel and be pregnant at the same time! I had morning sickness the entire pregnancy. I enjoyed each section and now you so creatively tied every thing together. I hated to see Bill go back to Nam, just like my brother, Steve. I am hopeful for our couple and their marriage and reunion.
Sending you both my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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I admire that Cathy can ride a Ferris wheel and be pregnant at the same time! I had morning sickness the entire pregnancy. I enjoyed each section and now you so creatively tied every thing together. I hated to see Bill go back to Nam, just like my brother, Steve. I am hopeful for our couple and their marriage and reunion.
Sending you both my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment Written 25-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2020
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Hi Sally! We are so happy that you enjoyed every section of this chapter. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing it. Your continued support means a lot to both of us! We are all hoping Bill makes it back to Cathy and their baby. Chapter 25 is already in the works and comings soon. Wishing you the best, also. Take care and God Bless. Have a nice weekend!
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy