Gift of Dawn
5-7-5 Hope20 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Everyday is a new day. I think that is something we often forget. Another day to be thankful we're alive, are loved, hopefully are healthy, etc. A good reminder for everyone.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Everyday is a new day. I think that is something we often forget. Another day to be thankful we're alive, are loved, hopefully are healthy, etc. A good reminder for everyone.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Many thanks!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
What a lovely way to put it. The beauty of sunrise can never be overstated. The stillness and the quietness at that time is such a comfort and lo in front of us is a glorious sight. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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What a lovely way to put it. The beauty of sunrise can never be overstated. The stillness and the quietness at that time is such a comfort and lo in front of us is a glorious sight. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Many thanks!
Comment from susand3022
Hi, MLLOTS! This is a lovely 5-7-5 you have penned here, and what a lovely photo that goes with it. Though we had a clear day yesterday, and it did get up to 50... and my deck got mostly dried off and everything... I woke up to a rainy, windy day. That means a mad cat. lol
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Hi, MLLOTS! This is a lovely 5-7-5 you have penned here, and what a lovely photo that goes with it. Though we had a clear day yesterday, and it did get up to 50... and my deck got mostly dried off and everything... I woke up to a rainy, windy day. That means a mad cat. lol
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2020
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Thank you, thank you.... this is the last thing I've written and my fingers/brain are itching to get back to it! Think I'll try to carve out some time this evening/tomorrow.... we'll see. You take care!! ;)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Gift of a new morn and the spread of sunlight brings in with another hope reborn, man keeps and carries hopes with the gift of new day light; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this exceptional contest entry; pray God prepare you a God sent sponsor to my Premier Shield Upgrade.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Gift of a new morn and the spread of sunlight brings in with another hope reborn, man keeps and carries hopes with the gift of new day light; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this exceptional contest entry; pray God prepare you a God sent sponsor to my Premier Shield Upgrade.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from QC Poet
Very nicely thought out visually descriptions in this 5-7-5 poem verses. Good submission with beautiful accompanying photo included with your posting. Good Luck in the contest. Blessings.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Very nicely thought out visually descriptions in this 5-7-5 poem verses. Good submission with beautiful accompanying photo included with your posting. Good Luck in the contest. Blessings.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Many thanks, g!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a fine 5-7-5 for the contest and your words certainly gave me hope as another day is dawning and I am hopeful that the world is at peace soon, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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This is a fine 5-7-5 for the contest and your words certainly gave me hope as another day is dawning and I am hopeful that the world is at peace soon, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Many thanks, Dolly!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love the image you choose for this poem, I see it as a personification of your poem - With morning's first breath,
sunlight shatters nighttime's grip...
and hope is reborn
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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I love the image you choose for this poem, I see it as a personification of your poem - With morning's first breath,
sunlight shatters nighttime's grip...
and hope is reborn
Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Many thanks, Iza!
Comment from RodG
You use METAPHORS very well in this poem to convey your message about the current pandemic. Our fears of the Corona virus are very wel symbolized by "nighttime's grip" and hope by each sunrise. Rod
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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You use METAPHORS very well in this poem to convey your message about the current pandemic. Our fears of the Corona virus are very wel symbolized by "nighttime's grip" and hope by each sunrise. Rod
Comment Written 19-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2020
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Many thanks, Rod!
Comment from Ricky1024
"Gift of Dawn"
I'd a Three Line Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky1024
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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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"Gift of Dawn"
I'd a Three Line Poetry Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky1024
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Many thanks, Doctor Ricky.
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
Beautiful. It captures the heart with bright colors and holds tight letting us now that night is not forever and we can be hopeful again each morning. A good lift for these times.
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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Beautiful. It captures the heart with bright colors and holds tight letting us now that night is not forever and we can be hopeful again each morning. A good lift for these times.
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2020
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Many thanks, Marilyn.