The Ripple Effect
Viewing comments for Prologue "The Sea Hag"A couple's tour about England takes many turns....
20 total reviews
Comment from Deanna More
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I love this poem!
How magnificent is the imagery! So surreal-like !...as was the dream-like daze that I drifted into ...as I read each line in hushed whispers.
This is the most 'poetic' poem that I've read in a long time.The visuals are outstanding and the accompanying misty portrait above...truly enhances the written words - to the nth degree.
Bravo!
Deanna xx
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I love this poem!
How magnificent is the imagery! So surreal-like !...as was the dream-like daze that I drifted into ...as I read each line in hushed whispers.
This is the most 'poetic' poem that I've read in a long time.The visuals are outstanding and the accompanying misty portrait above...truly enhances the written words - to the nth degree.
Bravo!
Deanna xx
Comment Written 02-Apr-2006
Comment from Tallteller
All the moist, scented comfort of a shady glade in the high heat of summer sharing the moment with a lover in rest, is captured blissfully in this sweet poem. Thanks for sharing
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All the moist, scented comfort of a shady glade in the high heat of summer sharing the moment with a lover in rest, is captured blissfully in this sweet poem. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 02-Apr-2006
Comment from Winbow
Absolutely your reviews are brilliant and I do always look forward to them. I feel like a bird sitting on a branch gently sipping the sweet nectar of the awesome flowers. World in my hands.
This is really a lovely poem Billy.
Take Care
Desiree
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Absolutely your reviews are brilliant and I do always look forward to them. I feel like a bird sitting on a branch gently sipping the sweet nectar of the awesome flowers. World in my hands.
This is really a lovely poem Billy.
Take Care
Desiree
Comment Written 02-Apr-2006
Comment from MStephany
Beautiful and sensual.
You have done a great job using descriptives that just drip with wonderful imagery.
I feel like I am there....
Write on!
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Beautiful and sensual.
You have done a great job using descriptives that just drip with wonderful imagery.
I feel like I am there....
Write on!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2006
Comment from Jack Hoops
this poem is great! the photograph at the beginning is very beautiful, it almost looks like a painting. great work with this!---------------jesse
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this poem is great! the photograph at the beginning is very beautiful, it almost looks like a painting. great work with this!---------------jesse
Comment Written 01-Apr-2006
Comment from ishta
Hovering above is a nice place to be. I enjoyed it and took the time to reread and take it all in. It was a very nice time doing so, as well. Not a dull moment in this, and yet it glides gently.
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Hovering above is a nice place to be. I enjoyed it and took the time to reread and take it all in. It was a very nice time doing so, as well. Not a dull moment in this, and yet it glides gently.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2006
Comment from Kym Jade
Well this was very beautiful and whoever it was meant for should be so deeply flattered. This work is enchanting and casts a spell over the reader and thier minds. Well odne Sir Poet.
Best wishes and dreams
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Well this was very beautiful and whoever it was meant for should be so deeply flattered. This work is enchanting and casts a spell over the reader and thier minds. Well odne Sir Poet.
Best wishes and dreams
Comment Written 31-Mar-2006
Comment from Bryana
Excellent imagery. The poem has a nice flow and rhythm.
It is a pleasure to read. It transport you to a sweet quiet place.
I like this...
I will sigh for a moment, a breath,
needed and performed in unison with life.
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Excellent imagery. The poem has a nice flow and rhythm.
It is a pleasure to read. It transport you to a sweet quiet place.
I like this...
I will sigh for a moment, a breath,
needed and performed in unison with life.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2006
Comment from RaymondJohn
This is a unique perspective, and one I like very much. I don't think you want to sip from the pastures, the others seem all right. I like the opening and ending of the poem and the flow. You create good images and I enjoyed this work immensely. Great job. Ray
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This is a unique perspective, and one I like very much. I don't think you want to sip from the pastures, the others seem all right. I like the opening and ending of the poem and the flow. You create good images and I enjoyed this work immensely. Great job. Ray
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2006
Comment from sellgirls
This is lovely. Thank you for responding to my poem (just kidding)! Your choice of words in this piece is incredible. It evokes a feeling of peace, yet simmering just below the surface. There are a lot of empty places getting ready to be filled in this.
"from a honey bees comb," <--stick an apostrophe in "bee's" :-)
Just great!
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This is lovely. Thank you for responding to my poem (just kidding)! Your choice of words in this piece is incredible. It evokes a feeling of peace, yet simmering just below the surface. There are a lot of empty places getting ready to be filled in this.
"from a honey bees comb," <--stick an apostrophe in "bee's" :-)
Just great!
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Comment Written 31-Mar-2006