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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful final journey and you make death sound heavenly here and I wish you luck with the contest, I expect this poem will touch many hearts, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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A faithful final journey and you make death sound heavenly here and I wish you luck with the contest, I expect this poem will touch many hearts, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you for this nice review...I'm always glad to hear from you.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is such a comforting post for all close to eternity. It will also comfort those left behind. The picture is perfect as an illustration for the poem. I am very happy reading this poem!
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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This is such a comforting post for all close to eternity. It will also comfort those left behind. The picture is perfect as an illustration for the poem. I am very happy reading this poem!
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem, It means a lot. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
What a beautiful poem. It makes me feel alot of different emotions. Sad and happy at the same time. Definitely worthy of a six star rating! Looking forward to reading more from you!
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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What a beautiful poem. It makes me feel alot of different emotions. Sad and happy at the same time. Definitely worthy of a six star rating! Looking forward to reading more from you!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much. I have 3 beautiful and smart daughters who inspire me...I'm so lucky.
Comment from RShipp
You obeyed the poetic terms of the contest to begin and end with the same word.
You did a great job with story progression with each stanza.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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You obeyed the poetic terms of the contest to begin and end with the same word.
You did a great job with story progression with each stanza.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Your poem is a fine entry for the Start and Ends The Same writing contest. It's the story of a person who does and goes to the afterlife with an angel. Good job.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Hello my friend
Your poem is a fine entry for the Start and Ends The Same writing contest. It's the story of a person who does and goes to the afterlife with an angel. Good job.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you for this nice review, it's much appreciated.
Comment from Raul1
This is a very light heartwarming poem. Piece by piece it talks about peace among people. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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This is a very light heartwarming poem. Piece by piece it talks about peace among people. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for this nice review. :)
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You're welcome
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow!! Such a beautiful offering of a complete story that proclaims a testimony all at the same time... well done! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Wow!! Such a beautiful offering of a complete story that proclaims a testimony all at the same time... well done! :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from WriterHeather
This is such a beautifully written poem. Heartbreaking and upsetting at the same time. Your flow is perfect. This is a flawless piece of writing. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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This is such a beautifully written poem. Heartbreaking and upsetting at the same time. Your flow is perfect. This is a flawless piece of writing. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Duke Lorphellus
What a lovely poem, it made me feel so calm, and although it started with a tragedy peace shined throughout. What a comforting experience. The text's color, background, and image enhanced it for me too. Good picks and good read.
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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What a lovely poem, it made me feel so calm, and although it started with a tragedy peace shined throughout. What a comforting experience. The text's color, background, and image enhanced it for me too. Good picks and good read.
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you for reading and for your kind words.
Comment from susand3022
Hello, Author...This entry for the First and Last Word the Same Contest is a really strong one. I think you'll do really well. I think your imagery was strong and flowed well from the start to the finish. Good luck! :)
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Hello, Author...This entry for the First and Last Word the Same Contest is a really strong one. I think you'll do really well. I think your imagery was strong and flowed well from the start to the finish. Good luck! :)
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2020
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. :)
