Feasting on God's Word
contest entry28 total reviews
Comment from royowen
What marvellous advice to provide for others, the bread of Heaven is a feast indeed. It feeds the sound, and stirs the embers of faith, our hunger should never go without it, it is life for those that eat of it. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
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What marvellous advice to provide for others, the bread of Heaven is a feast indeed. It feeds the sound, and stirs the embers of faith, our hunger should never go without it, it is life for those that eat of it. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...
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Well done
Comment from Gail Denham
I like the poem - the last line I think might be smoother. I wonder if you could say "heavenly manna God sends" - same syllable count. The whole of your poem tho - is so true. Good job.
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I like the poem - the last line I think might be smoother. I wonder if you could say "heavenly manna God sends" - same syllable count. The whole of your poem tho - is so true. Good job.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly for your review and comments, they are greatly appreciated. Blessings...
Comment from Bicpen
Excellent it approves the source of the context by good congruity and a motion delivering a smooth delivery of the voice which lifts the sentiment to an elevated position of a grand utopia.
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Excellent it approves the source of the context by good congruity and a motion delivering a smooth delivery of the voice which lifts the sentiment to an elevated position of a grand utopia.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
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Thanks so much for an outstanding review. Blessings
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anytime ...
Comment from Susan Larson
You very skillfully condensed four significant passages from the Bible into a mere seven syllables, ten words. God's Word, Manna from Heaven, always available for our spiritual nourishment. Taste and see that the Lord is good. Good contest entry.
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You very skillfully condensed four significant passages from the Bible into a mere seven syllables, ten words. God's Word, Manna from Heaven, always available for our spiritual nourishment. Taste and see that the Lord is good. Good contest entry.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly...Blessings
Comment from rjuselius
This is a fine piece of poetry dear anonymous! I love the spiritual point of view. I am slightly jealous for your faith as I lack somehow the courage.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
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This is a fine piece of poetry dear anonymous! I love the spiritual point of view. I am slightly jealous for your faith as I lack somehow the courage.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a humongous hug-it-out hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly...Blessings
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count
and topic are good.
-I like the use of
"nourish" and you
have a good message
about the benefit
of God's wisdom.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count
and topic are good.
-I like the use of
"nourish" and you
have a good message
about the benefit
of God's wisdom.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly...Blessings
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You are welcome.
Comment from June Sargent
I really try to remind myself every day to trust nit in my own wisdom, but that of God's. Proverbs 3:5, 6. The Bible was written for a reason and it is up to us to feed on this Manna from heaven. It will guide us through life's storms and challenges.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2020
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I really try to remind myself every day to trust nit in my own wisdom, but that of God's. Proverbs 3:5, 6. The Bible was written for a reason and it is up to us to feed on this Manna from heaven. It will guide us through life's storms and challenges.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly...Blessings
Comment from Boogienights
I can't do these short poems! This is so good! A great message to impart as well, I think this will do well in the contest. Thank you so much for sharing this wisdom.
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I can't do these short poems! This is so good! A great message to impart as well, I think this will do well in the contest. Thank you so much for sharing this wisdom.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly...Blessings
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, a well written 3/5/7 poem, true to form and the wording is very good. These short forms are not easy with so few syllables but you have said a lot with so few words. Well done and Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Hello anon, a well written 3/5/7 poem, true to form and the wording is very good. These short forms are not easy with so few syllables but you have said a lot with so few words. Well done and Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly...Blessings..
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Your words in this short 5-7-5 poem reflect what is said in the Bible very well. Trust in God, and you will receive. You must have faith though, trust and faith go hand in hand. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
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Your words in this short 5-7-5 poem reflect what is said in the Bible very well. Trust in God, and you will receive. You must have faith though, trust and faith go hand in hand. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
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Thank you kindly...Blessings