Just Breathe
5 7 5 Entry21 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley
lol, Hello there, June. This is simply adorable. I love the picture as well. Great alliteration. Nicely done, my friend. Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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lol, Hello there, June. This is simply adorable. I love the picture as well. Great alliteration. Nicely done, my friend. Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 08-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2020
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I'm glad this piece resonated with you and I appreciate your taking the time to read and review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from BeasPeas
Oh my, what beautiful parrots.
We can't let ourselves slip into confrontation. Two hot heads have to back off and/or the more rational of the two back off and leave the other one with mouth agape. Good job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Oh my, what beautiful parrots.
We can't let ourselves slip into confrontation. Two hot heads have to back off and/or the more rational of the two back off and leave the other one with mouth agape. Good job. Marilyn
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Yes, it?s hard to bite our tongue, but it can save us from regrets! Thanks for dropping in to read and share your insights!
Comment from Joan E.
What a striking, eye-catching artwork! Since we put up a birdfeeder, I have learned that birds are much more confrontational than I expected. Thank you for your good advice and rhymes in this 5-7-5. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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What a striking, eye-catching artwork! Since we put up a birdfeeder, I have learned that birds are much more confrontational than I expected. Thank you for your good advice and rhymes in this 5-7-5. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Yes, it?s hard to bite our tongue, but it can save us from regrets! Thanks for dropping in to read and share your insights!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest.
This short verse has some excellent advise about stopping to breath before a confrontation can arise.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest.
This short verse has some excellent advise about stopping to breath before a confrontation can arise.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Yes, it?s hard to bite our tongue, but it can save us from regrets! Thanks for dropping in to read and share your insights!
Comment from susand3022
Hi June, I love the birds, and the sage advice that they come with! I wish everyone would just stop... and take a breath! There should be a note on the Presidential Tweet button... before you Tweet... take a Presidential breath and count to 100!!! Then take another! LOL Who am I kidding... probably wouldn't help... lol
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Hi June, I love the birds, and the sage advice that they come with! I wish everyone would just stop... and take a breath! There should be a note on the Presidential Tweet button... before you Tweet... take a Presidential breath and count to 100!!! Then take another! LOL Who am I kidding... probably wouldn't help... lol
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Yes, it?s hard to bite our tongue, but it can save us from regrets! Thanks for dropping in to read and share your insights!
Comment from RodG
Ah, June, this is very good advice stated simply and succinctly. Too often conversation can degenerate into argument and both parties say things they regret later. Rod
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Ah, June, this is very good advice stated simply and succinctly. Too often conversation can degenerate into argument and both parties say things they regret later. Rod
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Yes, it?s hard to bite our tongue, but it can save us from regrets! Thanks for dropping in to read and share your insights!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello June!
Such wise words are presented in your well-crafted 5/7/5 offering. If only more people would follow your advice! So many people never truly listen to another speaker = too intent on the importance of making a smart-____ comeback!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Hello June!
Such wise words are presented in your well-crafted 5/7/5 offering. If only more people would follow your advice! So many people never truly listen to another speaker = too intent on the importance of making a smart-____ comeback!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Yes, it?s hard to bite our tongue, but it can save us from regrets! Thanks for dropping in to read and share your insights!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this June and the message conveyed. I think that cooler heads and hearts need to manifest in a situation like this. I love the accompanying artwork. Looks like they're about to go at it. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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I like this June and the message conveyed. I think that cooler heads and hearts need to manifest in a situation like this. I love the accompanying artwork. Looks like they're about to go at it. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Yes, it?s hard to bite our tongue, but it can save us from regrets! Thanks for dropping in to read and share your insights!
Comment from Tina Crute
This short little poem has much wisdom in it! The picture almost resembles a mama imparting this wisdom to her daughter.
If more adults would heed this...
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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This short little poem has much wisdom in it! The picture almost resembles a mama imparting this wisdom to her daughter.
If more adults would heed this...
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Yes, it?s hard to bite our tongue, but it can save us from regrets! Thanks for dropping in to read and share your insights!
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Youre welcome!
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
I too like cleo85's artwork - good choice with your 5-7-5 entry!
Those parrots or macaws - maybe they are parakeets? - do chatter a bit. With such colorful birds, you can spice up your text by colorizing your few words (-:
Mark
Lest or less? Methinks either takes on a different nuance.
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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June,
I too like cleo85's artwork - good choice with your 5-7-5 entry!
Those parrots or macaws - maybe they are parakeets? - do chatter a bit. With such colorful birds, you can spice up your text by colorizing your few words (-:
Mark
Lest or less? Methinks either takes on a different nuance.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Yes, it?s hard to bite our tongue, but it can save us from regrets! Thanks for dropping in to read and share your insights!